Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Mission to Destrillion

The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a comprehensive article nomination that was unsuccessful. Please do not modify it.

Mission to Destrillion

• Nominated by: —Unsigned comment by Corellian Premier (talk • contribs) 19:21, August 3, 2010 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Shortest of the articles I edited.

(0 ECs/1 Users/0 Total)

Support

1. looks worthy of a vote --DarthRage^{Leave a message after the beep} 23:21, August 30, 2010 (UTC)

Object

1. More can be added to the BTS regarding that concept image. --Eyrezer 04:28, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

• Sentence added. Corellian Premier^{All along the watchtower} 10:05, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

1. There is plenty of info in the infobox that is not in the article text: year of mission, ships used etc.
2. The first time Antilles is mentioned in the body you need to give his whole name and to link to him. You should also provide some context on who he is. Were there separate waves of Imp fighters? Why did the Imperials want to lure the Rebels there? Basically, so far this article has been given cursory treatment right through to keep it below the 250 word limit. --Eyrezer 23:27, August 30, 2010 (UTC)
   • Gave it another copy-edit. Sigh, now it is definitely not a CA. Corellian Premier^{All along the watchtower} 18:05, August 31, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

• Removed as too large for a CA. --Eyrezer 20:08, September 1, 2010 (UTC)