Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Mission to Barab I

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Mission to Barab I

• Nominated by: Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 13:38, December 11, 2011 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Part Seven

(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)

Support

1. Nice work.--Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 21:21, December 31, 2011 (UTC)
2. Fixed a minor spacing error. Good job. MasterFred^(Whatever) 16:51, January 4, 2012 (UTC)
3. Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 15:25, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Object

1. Cal Jedi
   • One of the things in the infobox is not referenced.
     • Bah, I must be getting to tired :P Adressed. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 10:36, December 31, 2011 (UTC)
       • Haha. Obviously, I know the feeling. :P --Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 21:21, December 31, 2011 (UTC)
   • "rumor of trouble" - Why is this in quotations in the body and infobox? I believe you can just remove the quotation marks.--Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 01:21, December 31, 2011 (UTC)
     • This is the way it is phrased in the novel. However, I agree and therefore removed the quotation marks. Thanks for the review. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 10:36, December 31, 2011 (UTC)
2. Exiled Jedi
   • "Mundi was defeated almost to death during his mission." This seems oddly worded to me, perhaps: "Mundi was defeated and nearly killed during his mission." In my opinion, this says the same thing in a much clearer way.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 02:46, January 2, 2012 (UTC)
     • Indeed, that was taken from the novel. Adressed and thanks. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 11:41, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

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