Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Mind eel

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Mind eel

  • Nominated by: Stake black msg 16:25, March 13, 2013 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:

(3 ECs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. ECvote 501st dogma(talk) 18:31, March 13, 2013 (UTC)
  2. ECvote [cough] Goa'uld! [cough].—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 05:12, March 14, 2013 (UTC)
  3. Per Kasra :D — DigiFluid(Whine here) 13:59, March 14, 2013 (UTC)
  4. Per Kasra Supreme Emperor (talk) 15:15, March 16, 2013 (UTC)
  5. ECvote Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 22:37, March 16, 2013 (UTC)

Object

  1. Only one thing: The first sentence has two many "located"s. Delocate one please. 501st dogma(talk) 18:18, March 13, 2013 (UTC)
  2. Style — DigiFluid(Whine here) 13:27, March 14, 2013 (UTC)
    • Aside from conjectural article titles, the article title and the first instance of bolding should read the same. In this case, the article is singular where the bold is plural. I think "Mind eels were a species..." ought to be replaced by "A mind eel was a species..."

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