Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Mechanic's code

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Mechanic's code

  • Nominated by: NBDani (talk) 21:57, 9 January 2022 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: IM EXCITED TO BE HERE
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:Resistance

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Support

  1. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 23:24, 9 January 2022 (UTC)
  2. Nice work! LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno (Talk) 12:39, 17 January 2022 (UTC)
  3. Forgot about this sorry! Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 17:33, 22 January 2022 (UTC)
  4. ECvote Commander Code-8 Hello There! 07:55, 27 January 2022 (UTC)
  5. ECvote OOM 224 22:32, 27 January 2022 (UTC)

Object

  • The code was a series of beeps and whistles and should be noted somewhere that it was an audio code, rather than a written one or something else. I'm also a little less fussed but can we say Tam and Neeku SPOKE the code? could we use the C template to specify a bit? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 06:10, 11 January 2022 (UTC)
    • Added that the code was beeps+whistles. Not sure on the infobox's speakers label. Maybe a broader conversation to be had.NBDani (talk) 13:44, 11 January 2022 (UTC)
Luca
  • Nice work, just a few things: It's a bit weird that you date the event in the middle of the sentence; would it be possible to reword it to have it either at the beginning or at the end of the first sentence?
    • Wasn't sure how I felt about this but moving it to the front dropped one of the The Escape refs so it worked out better that way. NBDani (talk) 00:18, 17 January 2022 (UTC)
  • It looks like the Databank entry states that the two mechanics had to meet on Castilon. If it is only used to reference the planet thing, it should be placed before the planet's name.
  • Did Xiono have any reaction to discovering that his colleagues were talking behind his back? Might be worth mentioning. LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno (Talk) 18:37, 12 January 2022 (UTC)
    • I've elaborated a bit more on the receiving of the message. Xiono's only response to the origin was an exaggerated "What?!" and then immediate concern for what the message says. NBDani (talk) 00:18, 17 January 2022 (UTC)
  • Last thing, it looks like [Category:Codes] is fitting. LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno (Talk) 05:50, 17 January 2022 (UTC)
    • I was shocked I couldn't find a page for 'code' alone but of course I missed the category for it :P Done. NBDani (talk) 12:17, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 22:32, 27 January 2022 (UTC)