Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Mark II assault droid (Cold War)

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Mark II assault droid (Cold War)

  • Nominated by: Winterz (talk) 22:02, August 24, 2014 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: derp 2.0

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501st
  • Dat red link. 501st dogma(talk) 22:34, August 24, 2014 (UTC)
    • I thought one redlink was allowed :P. Anyway, done. Winterz (talk) 23:30, August 24, 2014 (UTC)
Ayrehead
  • The date should have the TORdates reference as it can't be referenced to the game itself. Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:40, August 25, 2014 (UTC)
    • Done.
  • Description of the droid's appearance needs to be included in the body and the plating and sensor color should be included in the infobox. Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:40, August 25, 2014 (UTC)
    • Did all but the sensor stuff, what is that about?!
      • By my understanding sensors is the same as eye color for droids. I could be wrong but that's what it's been in several articles I've gotten to status and no one complained. Ayrehead02 (talk) 23:56, August 25, 2014 (UTC)
  • Use of blaster pistols needs to be included in the body.Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:40, August 25, 2014 (UTC)
    • Dummy me, done! Winterz (talk) 21:01, August 25, 2014 (UTC)
Exiled Jedi
  • The last sentence of the main body seems a little off. Are all the droids said to be modifications of each other? If that is the case, please word the part about it being a weaker version more formally.
    • Done.
  • The first sentence of the BTS makes it sound like all Republic players could complete the quest, please reword.
    • Fixed.
  • Please make it clearer in the BTS that the quest is part of a series.
    • Done.
  • "Though its naming makes the droid series unique, the ragdoll..." What do you mean by ragdoll?
    • Corrected.
  • Is there an applicable quote from Dentiri?
    • No.
  • You are at 202 words, please section the article.
    • It is now at 224 words.--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 02:44, August 28, 2014 (UTC)
      • This is really not something for GAN but anyway, done. Winterz (talk) 23:13, September 2, 2014 (UTC)
        • The stuff about the droid's appearance belongs in a description section.--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 23:18, September 2, 2014 (UTC)
          • Indeed, done. Winterz (talk) 00:34, September 9, 2014 (UTC)
  • I'm sorry, but that image is not very good. Please get a better one.--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 23:30, August 27, 2014 (UTC)
    • That image was all I could get, so until there's something better, that one stays. Low-quality image is better than no image at all. Winterz (talk) 02:13, August 28, 2014 (UTC)

Comments

  1. If it is an optional quest, should we add that the Jedi character may have participated in it, with relevant Gamemechanics tags? Corellian PremierJedi symbolThe Force will be with you always 22:12, August 28, 2014 (UTC)
    • I'm not sure that is really necessary seeing how this is already a subject from the optional quest, already assuming it was completed. Because if it wasn't, then the droid doesn't even appear on the game. ;) Winterz (talk) 23:06, September 2, 2014 (UTC)