- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a comprehensive article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Main administration building (Eastern Enrichment Zone)
- Nominated by: Holocron
(Complain) 02:35, January 19, 2011 (UTC) - Nomination comments: Yeah, that really is everything known about the place. Nothing at all.
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- NaruHina Talk
17:34, January 24, 2011 (UTC) - Darth Morrt 09:26, January 25, 2011 (UTC)
- Menkooroo 11:43, January 25, 2011 (UTC)
- Master Jonathan
(Jedi Council Chambers) 18:36, January 27, 2011 (UTC) 
1358 (Talk) 15:52, January 30, 2011 (UTC)
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Could have an (albeit short) infobox. --Vandar Tokare42 (Talk to the hand) 02:46, January 19, 2011 (UTC)- Added, though it seems pointless for such a tiny article. Holocron (Complain) 03:27, January 19, 2011 (UTC)
- Added, though it seems pointless for such a tiny article. Holocron
- That Rube
Contextify the Enrichment Dome, the Zone, and the Agri-Corp. (Not the cab—*URK* NaruHina Talk 03:06, January 21, 2011 (UTC)- Did my best to add context to the Agri-Corps and the dome, but the Zone really has nothing to add to it. You're never really told what it is or what it does, just what's in it. Holocron (Complain) 07:59, January 21, 2011 (UTC)
- Not sufficient for the Agri-Corps. By the way, was the Eastern the only Zone on the planet? "Eastern" implies there are multiple, but the Agri-Corps Enrichment Zone says there was only one called "AC Enrich Zone."NaruHina Talk 00:52, January 23, 2011 (UTC)
- I think I fixed the Agri-Corps problem. As far as I can see from reading the novel, no other zone is ever mentioned. The Eastern Enrichment Zone is, but there doesn't seem to be any North, South or Western Zones. Holocron (Complain) 03:59, January 23, 2011 (UTC)
- I think I fixed the Agri-Corps problem. As far as I can see from reading the novel, no other zone is ever mentioned. The Eastern Enrichment Zone is, but there doesn't seem to be any North, South or Western Zones. Holocron
- Not sufficient for the Agri-Corps. By the way, was the Eastern the only Zone on the planet? "Eastern" implies there are multiple, but the Agri-Corps Enrichment Zone says there was only one called "AC Enrich Zone."NaruHina Talk
- Did my best to add context to the Agri-Corps and the dome, but the Zone really has nothing to add to it. You're never really told what it is or what it does, just what's in it. Holocron
- From the Council Chambers:
As written, the BTS says that The Dark Rival was the second book in the series that Watson wrote, which is false (Dave Wolverton wrote the first book). Please reword so that it's clear that this was simply the second book in the series.- Done. Holocron (Complain) 08:44, January 27, 2011 (UTC)
- Done. Holocron
- Also, I removed the hyphen from AgriCorps; while the book uses it, all other sources I'm aware of, including the Power of the Jedi Sourcebook, The Complete Star Wars Encyclopedia, and The Jedi Path, do not use it, so it's better to go with the majority. Master Jonathan (Jedi Council Chambers) 04:47, January 27, 2011 (UTC)
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