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Lyrical Metaphysics: Ode on an Odon

  • Nominated by: VergenceScatter (talk) 14:57, 8 September 2022 (UTC)
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Support

  1. ECvote JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 06:16, 9 September 2022 (UTC)
  2. Dentface (talk) 21:43, 9 September 2022 (UTC)
  3. Samonic Signatureicon (Talk) 19:01, 23 September 2022 (UTC)
  4. ECvote Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 21:44, 25 September 2022 (UTC)
  5. ECvote Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 04:22, 3 October 2022 (UTC)

Object

Braha
  • Since one poem was translated from another language, can we have a specification on what language the Anthology is in if that information is available? Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 14:37, 23 September 2022 (UTC)
    • It's not stated what it's translated into. I assume Basic, but the wizards.com article doesn't give that info. VergenceScatter (talk) 18:24, 23 September 2022 (UTC)
      • Written English is considered basic so yes, you can say it was translated to Basic. No need to get crazy with the ref either, you can just use the source article like normal :) Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 13:22, 25 September 2022 (UTC)
Manoof
  • Context for the living force campaign (ie that it was an rpg game) Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 14:50, 25 September 2022 (UTC)
    • Precedent is that it's not necessary.
      • Had a chat with other ECs and we should be giving that context. It’s alluded to a bit with your updated wording but needs to be clearer, and the other article linked should also be updated. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 14:05, 27 September 2022 (UTC)
        • Done
  • Publisher is missing from the infobox Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 14:50, 25 September 2022 (UTC)
    • Added.
  • ”Academic paper of the same name” needs to be specific, it could be interpreted that the paper had Londahl’s name. Similarly for same topic (is the topic death or…?) Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 14:50, 25 September 2022 (UTC)
    • Expanded the topic but I really don't see how one could misconstrue the paper as having Londahl's name.
      • Its still not clear, the statement is too far removed from the shared name, can you say "also titled"? its more appropriate to say that it discussed the same topic. so I'd suggest "Because the poem discussed the topic of death, the poem was included in an academic paper, also titled "Life's memories", in that topic." You can also skip the poem title in the last sentence and just say "the poem" as there is no other poem discussed. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 20:29, 2 October 2022 (UTC)
        • I mean, the poem is referred to in the same sentence so it's definitely not too far away, but I made the change. VergenceScatter (talk) 22:17, 2 October 2022 (UTC)
  • Need to mention that it tied into Excursion Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 14:50, 25 September 2022 (UTC)

Comments

  • I realize there are several pieces of info that aren't directly related to the book, but I feel like all are necessary for context. However, if there is something extraneous that I can remove, I'd be happy to. —Unsigned comment by VergenceScatter (talk • contribs)

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 04:23, 3 October 2022 (UTC)