Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Long-range triad transmitter (Colonial Station Chaf)

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Long-range triad transmitter (Colonial Station Chaf)

• Nominated by: Samonic 09:31, 27 June 2022 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: 15th Kiljipedia nomination, I think? #GoodbyeKilhorde
• WookieeProject (optional): Novels, Chiss

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Braha

• "which led the generalirius to fear that his generals had been so foolishly ambitious to extend their conquest to the Chiss world" What is "the Chiss world"? Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 19:57, 28 June 2022 (UTC)
  • Belay that. I hadn't considered the first sentence. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 19:59, 28 June 2022 (UTC)

CC-8

• It'd still be helpful to have a disambiguation template
  • Added.
• The infobox says that the transmitter was affiliated with the Chiss Ascendancy, but the body only says that it was on an Ascendancy affiliated world and the Kilju are the ones who use it Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 06:51, 20 July 2022 (UTC)
  • I removed the affiliation, might be operated by aliens and not Chiss. (The Chiss don't usually let outsiders use their things) Samonic 07:16, 20 July 2022 (UTC)
• I think describing the conflict as taking place within the northeast of Paataatus territory would be clearer
  • Fixed. Samonic 12:35, 25 July 2022 (UTC)
• Is there any more detail about how conquering Colonial Station Chaf would have disrupted the transmitter? Like I can make some assumptions but want to be sure Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 12:12, 25 July 2022 (UTC)
  • No details. I would assume that warships orbiting a planet would make everyone shut down everything and start fighting the Kiljis :P Samonic 12:35, 25 July 2022 (UTC)

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