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Lomina Argo
- Nominated by: Cal Jedi
(Personal Comm Channel) 16:02, July 7, 2011 (UTC) - Nomination comments:WAY BACK!! and GONE!!
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- Exiled Jedi
(Greetings) 23:04, July 8, 2011 (UTC) 
I added a "sic" to the quote to indicate that the errors there (one grammatical, one puntuational) are in the OS and are not ours. ~Savage
16:49, July 15, 2011 (UTC)- Menkooroo 07:15, July 18, 2011 (UTC)
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- Exiled Jedi
You need to mention Argo's hair, eye and skin color in the main part of the article instead of just the infobox.- Pardon me, I missed it the first time.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 21:30, July 8, 2011 (UTC)
- Pardon me, I missed it the first time.--Exiled Jedi
For light colored skin, the common term used to describe it on Wookieepedia is "fair". (Someone else told me this, so I thought I would pass it on.)- OK got it.
I'm not sure about this, but shouldn't six-month-old be changed to six-month old. I ask this because it is "six-month old" in the quote.- You're probably right.
I think that you should give some sort of description in the article about the jewelry and clothing that she is seen wearing in the picture.- Isn't much to tell, but I added a little.
I believe that Joe Corroney is an illustrator not an author.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 21:28, July 8, 2011 (UTC)
- Oops, got author and artist confused. Cal Jedi (Personal Comm Channel) 22:09, July 8, 2011 (UTC)
- Oops, got author and artist confused. Cal Jedi
Just one --- in the article, both Coleman and Lomina are said to have "stated" something --- can you find a synonym for one of them? It's admittedly probably a {{sofixit}}, but I wanna see what you can do here.:) Menkooroo 15:03, July 10, 2011 (UTC)- Take a look at that man! Cal Jedi (Personal Comm Channel) 01:50, July 11, 2011 (UTC)
- Take a look at that man! Cal Jedi
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