Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Lo Bukk

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Lo Bukk

• Nominated by: Cumulonimbus Cloud ^{(Meeting Room)} 17:56, June 17, 2012 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Same as above

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1. 501st
   • You say: "thirty five years before the Clone Wars". You should link that to the correct date of 57 BBY.
     • Done.
   • You need to say before they met Plagueis they were bargaining with a Barabel for a water skimmer.
     • Done.
   • You should also say both of them felt Plagueis' presence, though did not identify him as a sith.
     • Done.
   • Maybe expand the attack part: mention they tracked him with the skimmer, and fought near the water.
     • Done.
   • You should say they met Plagueis while bearing flagons of liquid from an eatery, and how they sat at a table while they talked to the Muun.
     • Done.
   • I think there is enough info to add a Personality and traits section, with things such as Bukk's more open attitude, as he easily devulged the nature of their mission to the Muun.
     • Done.
       • Overlinking like I said above.
         • Done.
   • It seems to me by the dialogue that Bukk's master kills Lare. This should be added to both articles.
     • I'm not sure if that's true...
       • "Stand aside Padawan", and "It's done. He's dead" are pretty clear indications that Ni-Cada killed Lare.
         • Done.
   • Thats all for now. I think there is enough info to bring this to GAN. These aditions will bring the article over 200 words, which then requires an intro to be written. Good work. 501st dogma^(talk) 20:57, June 17, 2012 (UTC)
     • Do you think the artical needs to be put up on the GAN page now? Or can it stay? Cumulonimbus Cloud ^{(Meeting Room)} 02:51, June 19, 2012 (UTC)
       • I'll do what I said for the Ni-Cada nom
   • Same reffing issues as Ni-Cada501st dogma^(talk) 13:56, June 19, 2012 (UTC)
     • Done. Cumulonimbus Cloud ^{(ℳeeting ℛoom)} 21:15, June 19, 2012 (UTC)
   • Add quotes for Bio and P&T. 501st dogma^(talk) 23:12, June 19, 2012 (UTC)
     • Done. Cumulonimbus Cloud ^{(ℳeeting ℛoom)} 20:59, June 20, 2012 (UTC)
       • Dialogue issue, like I said above. 501st dogma^(talk) 21:44, June 20, 2012 (UTC)
         • Done. Cumulonimbus Cloud ^{(ℳeeting ℛoom)} 22:28, June 21, 2012 (UTC)
   • That should be it. I'll archive them after you fix the quote issues. 501st dogma^(talk) 21:48, June 20, 2012 (UTC)