Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Lio

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Lio

• Nominated by: Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 11:02, August 28, 2010 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Lee continues his bombardment of the CAnom page

(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)

Support

1. Jonjedigrandmaster ^(Talk) 15:12, August 28, 2010 (UTC)
2. Superb.—Jedi Kasra (comlink) 20:21, August 28, 2010 (UTC)
3. -- 1358 ^(Talk) 19:27, August 29, 2010 (UTC)
4. SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is the truth)} 14:20, August 31, 2010 (UTC)

Object

1. Jujiggum
   • Every single sentence in the article begins with "Lio". Please reword some of them.
     • Reworded.
   • Are there any quotes relating to him? Does the novel mention him only in prose, or do Kal and/or Walon actually speak about him at some point?
     • No, the just mention his name together with several others. But this sentence consists from several names.
       • So, in other words, Kal/Walon do speak about him, in a sentence naming several other clones? If this is the case, you should still add that quote. It doesn't matter if there are other names involved, too; it still applies to Lio. Jonjedigrandmaster ^(Talk) 15:01, August 28, 2010 (UTC)
         • Added. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 15:09, August 28, 2010 (UTC)
   • That's all. Jonjedigrandmaster ^(Talk) 14:52, August 28, 2010 (UTC)
     • Thank you. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 14:55, August 28, 2010 (UTC)
2. Xd1358
   • That Lio was the nickname of a clone trooper can not be sourced to the databank entry.
     • Fixed.
   • -- 1358 ^(Talk) 11:05, August 29, 2010 (UTC)
     • Thanks. (Once again) Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 13:00, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

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