Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Line leader

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Line leader

  • Nominated by: —Vuvalan ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol (talk) 01:17, 17 June 2023 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: This is my first nomination so sorry if I do some stuff wrong lol.
  • Date Archived: 02:22, 28 June 2023 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 126 words (0 introduction, 99 body, 27 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:Chiss, WP:Novels

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Support

  1. ECvote Awesome job on your first go! Lewisr (talk) 03:35, 20 June 2023 (UTC)
  2. ECvote Welcome! JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 17:47, 27 June 2023 (UTC)
  3. ECvote —spookywillowwtalk 02:21, 28 June 2023 (UTC)

Object

Lew
  • Welcome to the CAN! Is there some kind of dating that can be added? Lewisr (talk) 14:04, 17 June 2023 (UTC)
    • Yes. Sorry, I didn't see the "establishedby" section lol. Thanks for pointing that out, it has been added.—Vuvalan ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol (talk) 16:17, 17 June 2023 (UTC)
      • All good haha, you'll need to include the date in the body too Lewisr (talk) 16:30, 17 June 2023 (UTC)
        • Added as well—Vuvalan ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol (talk) 16:34, 17 June 2023 (UTC)
          • Did a little reworking Lewisr (talk) 18:22, 17 June 2023 (UTC)
            • Thank you lol. I didn't know if what I added sounded good, but I still went with it. Sorry this is taking this long to figure out haha—Vuvalan ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol (talk) 00:26, 18 June 2023 (UTC)
              • It's all good! You're new at it so I perfectly understand Lewisr (talk) 00:31, 18 June 2023 (UTC)
  • Context for Rentor is needed, i.e. it being a planet or moon Lewisr (talk) 14:08, 17 June 2023 (UTC)
  • What's currently put as a quote isn't actually a quote in the book from what I can see. If there's nothing else (either from Chaos Rising or one of the other two books) then it should be removed Lewisr (talk) 18:22, 17 June 2023 (UTC)
    • Yeah, I was questioning whether or not that should be there as well. For some other articles, they have a non-quote as a quote (if that makes sense) so I assumed it was okay to do so as that is exactly what Thurfian thought (for example an article would have something out of a journal, etc.). At any rate, I'll remove it.—Vuvalan ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol (talk) 00:26, 18 June 2023 (UTC)
      • I believe journal ones would be okay, just this is an instance which is just Thurfian's thoughts, so it's a little different. But thanks! Lewisr (talk) 00:31, 18 June 2023 (UTC)
  • You use a core name when you introduce Kivu'raw'nuru, but not for Mitth'urf'ianico, for consistency sake you should add it to Mitth'urf'ianico as well.
  • The BTS should mention that Chaos Rising was the first volume in the Star Wars: The Ascendancy Trilogy.
  • You categorise it as a rank, but say it is a position in the body, which is accurate? Lewisr (talk) 14:38, 18 June 2023 (UTC)
    • It's not really known, the book barely says. I didn't put the category there, someone else did and I couldn't find a better place to put it, so I just ran with it. All the book says is that it's a student at the academy. I put "position" because it's a vaguer term than "rank."—Vuvalan ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol (talk) 02:57, 20 June 2023 (UTC)
Macaroni
  • You should establish in the date note how Thrawn being a cadet is connected to line leader. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 02:54, 19 June 2023 (UTC)

Comments

  • I just added the formatting ("Vurawn") for his core name because after the introduction to core names in the article, it is decided that it will be formatted like that by WP:Chiss.—Vuvalan ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol (talk) 18:36, 20 June 2023 (UTC)

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 02:21, 28 June 2023 (UTC)