Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Limestone

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Limestone

• Nominated by: LucaRoR ^(Talk) 07:28, 26 August 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:
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Support

1. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 12:27, 26 August 2021 (UTC)
2. Manoof (talk) 05:46, 28 August 2021 (UTC)
3. Dentface (talk) 06:17, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
4. OOM 224 20:17, 29 September 2021 (UTC)
5. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 23:22, 1 October 2021 (UTC)

Object

Calcium carbonate

• The quote from Aphra 2 should be included.
• "Limestone could be confused with marble." I don't see how Detta's quote confuses the two, rather than says both are similar to bone. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 10:30, 26 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Both done, thanks! LucaRoR ^(Talk) 11:21, 26 August 2021 (UTC)

Manoof

• Should there be an external link to wikipedia's limestone article? Manoof (talk) 13:57, 26 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Done (It was my first time using {{BookCite}}, it is possible that I've made a mistake, even though I've paid attention to do it correctly). LucaRoR ^(Talk) 14:41, 26 August 2021 (UTC)
    • Looks good! I actually meant you could add the wikipedia article for limestone under an External Link section, per WP:Layout Guide ;) Manoof (talk) 13:12, 27 August 2021 (UTC)
      • Oh right, added! LucaRoR ^(Talk) 13:43, 27 August 2021 (UTC)
• As a stone, this should be in the Mineral category rather than Substance. Manoof (talk) 13:57, 26 August 2021 (UTC)
  • I'm not sure how this category works, but in real life stones and minerals are different things. In a stone (usually) there are minerals, but that doesn't make it a mineral. It's possible that the category minerals includes stones and I haven't noticed, though. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 14:41, 26 August 2021 (UTC)
    • You have stone in the infobox. Stone is in the minerals category, which is a subcategory of substance. If limestone is a stone and stone is a mineral then limestone is also a mineral. Also we always go with the subcategory. Manoof (talk) 13:12, 27 August 2021 (UTC)
      • Added, even though maybe I've expressed myself wrongly. A stone is composed by minerals and other substances, this doesn't make a stone a mineral. Is like water is made by Oxygen and Hydrogen , this doesn't mean that water is Oxygen, at least not completely. ;) LucaRoR ^(Talk) 13:42, 27 August 2021 (UTC)

Lewis

• Sources such as the databank entry for Bogano, and trailers that depict the limestone are currently missing from the page. Regarding this also, unless you can see the limestone in an earlier trailer, this one for Cal's Mission currently would be the 1stp for limestone, so this would need to be reflected in the BTS Lewisr (talk) 15:47, 26 August 2021 (UTC)
  • I've checked all the official trailers, only in the one already linked by you limestone could be seen. Added to sources and updated the BTS. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 18:16, 26 August 2021 (UTC)
    • Sources are added in release order, except for the databank which is always at the bottom of the list Lewisr (talk) 20:26, 26 August 2021 (UTC)
      • Done, and fixed the BTS. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 10:25, 27 August 2021 (UTC)

Fan

• Canon is doublelinked.
• In the BTS you shouldn't format the Canto Bight short story like in the "Apperances" section. This is part of the article body, not a list, so it should say that Hear Nothing, See Nothing, Say Nothing is part of the Canto Bight novella collection. Fan26 (Talk) 02:31, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Both done, thanks! LucaRoR ^(Talk) 04:26, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
    • I'm nitpicking here, I'm aware, but the short story was only part of the novella collection published in 2017, not published in the novella collection published in 2017. Fan26 (Talk) 02:11, 3 September 2021 (UTC)
      • Better? LucaRoR ^(Talk) 06:17, 3 September 2021 (UTC)

Dent

• You need to add the Canto Bight audiobook to the appearances section.
• I would check Star Wars: The Rise of Skywalker: A Junior Novel for a limestone appearance since it has to do with the Resistance base, which is a central location.
• If limestone's on Bogano, I would check "The Princess and the Bog, A Twin Tale, Part 1" and "Part 2" as well. Dentface (talk) 05:08, 31 August 2021 (UTC)
  • All done and checked. Limestone isn't even mentioned in these, it just appears (Indirect appearance :P), hence, I've found no additional information. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 08:56, 31 August 2021 (UTC)
    • Make sure you have the "simultaneous with" field in {{1st}} filled out for the short story, since the print book of Canto Bight and the audiobook were released on the same day.
    • Additionally, there shouldn't be any parentheticals in the link to the TROS Junior Novel audiobook.
    • Also, I'd check Star Wars: The Last Jedi: Expanded Edition and Star Wars: The Last Jedi: A Junior Novel for any explicit appearances. According to the Zord's Spa and Bathhouse article, it does appear in these titles. Whether that's relevant enough for listing in the Limestone appearances section depends on how it's described. Definitely work checking into. Dentface (talk) 15:54, 31 August 2021 (UTC)
      • Done. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 16:00, 31 August 2021 (UTC)

Pastastone

• Canto Bight is missing from the infobox.
• The 3 ABY date ref says that the stone appeared in DA #2, but appearances says it was mentioned. Which is it?
• Audiobook should not be mentioned in the bts.
• Please link to Wikipedia by using Fandom's linking feature like this: limestone. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 23:42, 6 September 2021 (UTC)
  • All done. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 04:53, 7 September 2021 (UTC)
• Context and author for the TLJ dictionary.
• Why nothing in the bts on the deleted scene? JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 16:28, 12 September 2021 (UTC)
  • How's that? LucaRoR ^(Talk) 17:43, 12 September 2021 (UTC)
    • Please reference it to a source that contains the scene. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 23:33, 14 September 2021 (UTC)
      • Done. Could someone remeber me how I ended up nominating a CAN with 13 refernces? :P LucaRoR ^(Talk) 05:18, 15 September 2021 (UTC)
        • That video needs to be listed in sources if it mentions/pictures the subject. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 02:55, 23 September 2021 (UTC)
          • Oh dang it, added, thanks. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 19:20, 23 September 2021 (UTC)

OOM

• The subject could probably use an image category OOM 224 20:58, 26 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Created and added. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 04:49, 27 September 2021 (UTC)
• Infobox-exclusive info
• "the structure of [a planet]" — I'm not sure about using the word "structure" here. What does the source say?
• I don't see a need to mention the characters' species in paragraph two. OOM 224 16:36, 28 September 2021 (UTC)
  • All done. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 20:12, 28 September 2021 (UTC)
• The locations in the infobox should be ordered alphabetically
• Some extra context in which the bones on Dianth were found would be helpful. Since the time and people involved are already detailed, I'd go on to explain why the bones were there.
• You probably should expand upon the nature of limestone's cut appearance in TLJ, like the stone's location OOM 224 20:48, 28 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Completed review via Discord OOM 224 20:17, 29 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments

• Big thanks to Lewisr for all the sources he's checked for me! LucaRoR ^(Talk) 17:58, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
• I need to check a couple more appearances/sources that Dentface kindly brought to my attention. When finished I will strike this comment. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 16:38, 31 August 2021 (UTC)

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 23:22, 1 October 2021 (UTC)