Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Lesser Galam

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Lesser Galam

  • Nominated by: Winterz (talk) 14:37, December 28, 2012 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Just 2 more!

(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)

Support

  1. ECvote 501st dogma(talk) 13:45, December 29, 2012 (UTC)
  2. ECvote Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 23:00, December 29, 2012 (UTC)
  3. Supreme Emperor (talk) 03:50, December 30, 2012 (UTC)

Object

  1. Exiled Jedi
    • Warm climate seems a little misleading, since the infobox says searing rock.
      • eheh it's still recommendable for those looking for sun baths :p. Corrected.
    • "...started exploring the mines" Were there mines there before the Humans bought the mining rights? Then someone would have had to build them. Please clarify whether there was mining activity on the planet before the Humans arrived.--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 20:51, December 28, 2012 (UTC)
      • Corrected! Winterz (talk) 21:46, December 28, 2012 (UTC)
  1. 501st
    • Why is the galactic empire in the affiliation? You say in the article it had no presence there.
      • Scratch that. It makes sense. 501st dogma(talk) 13:45, December 29, 2012 (UTC)
    • Otherwise it looks good. 501st dogma(talk) 13:26, December 29, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

  • These last three of my nominations may look similar but that's because nearly all information there is the same, in case you sirs, were about to ask it, although I've tweaked several sentences. Winterz (talk) 21:46, December 28, 2012 (UTC)