Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Ledaney's partner

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Ledaney's partner

• Nominated by: Immi Thrax (talk) 00:05, 20 August 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:
• WookieeProject (optional): For WookieeProject: Pride and covered by WookieeProject: Novels

(2 ECs/3 Users/5 Total)

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Support

1. Dentface (talk) 22:05, 21 August 2021 (UTC)
2. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 07:40, 22 August 2021 (UTC)
3. Oh god it's an I'm stuff joke. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 01:51, 26 August 2021 (UTC)
4. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 00:46, 27 August 2021 (UTC)
5. YakovChaimTzvi (talk) 13:03, 28 August 2021 (UTC)

Object

Spooky

• Imo it's probably possible to avoid having male as the bolded word, or at least, not have to link the bolded word, with some rearranging of that first sentence. Seems to be SA standard in recent times to have it avoid that, unless coincidence.—spookywilloww^talk 19:08, 20 August 2021 (UTC)
  • How's that? Immi Thrax (talk) 21:08, 20 August 2021 (UTC)

Braha

• Corellia needs context. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 19:20, 21 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Contextualized! Immi Thrax (talk) 21:54, 21 August 2021 (UTC)

Yaki

• Good work, but the second sentence is a run-on and made it hard for me to read it. -- YakovChaimTzvi (talk) 21:11, 27 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Revised into separate sentences! Immi Thrax (talk) 05:26, 28 August 2021 (UTC)

Comments

• When Ledaney is with her squadron mates that's talking about the Precision air team, right? Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 19:20, 21 August 2021 (UTC)
  • His squadron is indeed that—I didn't realize there was an article for it. Thanks! Incorporated now :) Immi Thrax (talk) 21:54, 21 August 2021 (UTC)
    • No problem! Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 07:40, 22 August 2021 (UTC)

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 14:15, 28 August 2021 (UTC)