Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Larbo Nelik

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Larbo Nelik

• Nominated by: Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 12:56, December 11, 2011 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Another short break

(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)

Support

1. --Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 18:56, December 30, 2011 (UTC)
2. Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 02:40, January 2, 2012 (UTC)
3. NaruHina ^Talk 09:27, January 2, 2012 (UTC)
4. ~Savage 00:59, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Object

1. Bob
   • Do we know she was a Podracer during the last decades of the Republic? If we don't, perhaps you should add "who lived during the last decades" instead?
     • Changed. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 17:08, December 28, 2011 (UTC)
   • Podrace is coming up a redirect for me, so be sure to pick the correct target.
     • Better? Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 17:08, December 28, 2011 (UTC)
   • Can you add a bit of context to BTS about how or why she came up in Wild Space? Otherwise, she seems completely unrelated to the book. ~Savage 15:58, December 28, 2011 (UTC)
     • Contexted. Thanks for the review. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 17:08, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

1. The_Cal_Jedi
   • "Nelik had a terrible crash" - "Terrible" sounds POV to me. Perhaps a less POV term is needed, or else just leaving that word out would be good.
     • From what POV is such a crash not terrible. No just a joke, replaced with "massive". Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 14:25, December 30, 2011 (UTC)
       • Some people enjoy crashing. :P --Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 18:56, December 30, 2011 (UTC)
   • Otherwise, good work.--Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 05:09, December 30, 2011 (UTC)
     • Thanks for the review. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 14:25, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

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