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Lagret's brother
- Nominated by: Stake black msg 13:23, 5 July 2025 (UTC)
- Nomination comments:
- Date Archived: 00:25, 25 July 2025 (UTC)
- Final word count: 148 words (0 introduction, 119 body, 29 behind the scenes)
- Word count at nomination time: 124 words (0 introduction, 99 body, 25 behind the scenes)
- WookieeProject (optional): WP:AMB
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Support votes
Lewisr (talk) 22:13, 17 July 2025 (UTC)- StarWarsFan327 (talk) 11:10, 20 July 2025 (UTC)
CometSmudge (talk) 04:00, 22 July 2025 (UTC)
—spookywillowwtalk 00:25, 25 July 2025 (UTC)
Objections
Lew
We shouldn't assume that he is a human, since adaptations are possible, though it would be relevant to note Lagret himself is a humanLewisr (talk) 16:38, 14 July 2025 (UTC)Lagret's brother isn't really a canonical name so I'd suggest tweaking the start to something like Jon Wittick's sisterLewisr (talk) 16:38, 14 July 2025 (UTC)Lagret being a captain is citable to Star Wars Encyclopedia: The Comprehensive Guide to the Star Wars Galaxy, so the long reference note can be trimmedLewisr (talk) 16:38, 14 July 2025 (UTC)Scarif being a planet needs a different sourceLewisr (talk) 16:38, 14 July 2025 (UTC)- Fixed. Stake black msg 21:17, 14 July 2025 (UTC)
I think you can cut the mention of the battleLewisr (talk) 04:56, 17 July 2025 (UTC)Do think why Dedra is being interrogated should be briefly established, to better tie in with why she'd mention Lagret's brotherLewisr (talk) 04:56, 17 July 2025 (UTC)- Done. Stake black msg 06:07, 17 July 2025 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 00:25, 25 July 2025 (UTC)