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Kulton Woodle
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Support
Lost in translation... ~ SavageBob 21:45, December 1, 2010 (UTC)- If you can, you should go back at the height of noon to took a better picture of him. Darth Morrt 12:38, December 12, 2010 (UTC)
- Yahoo! Menkooroo 07:25, January 4, 2011 (UTC)
- Looked it over, looks pretty solid to me. Couldn't find anything to really object to. And his helmet is awesome. How can I not vote for him with a helmet like that? Trak Nar Ramble on 08:18, January 11, 2011 (UTC)
Object
Is this reported conversation done through the protocol droid? Perhaps mention that. The second paragraph seems very PBP to me. I'd remove the "when asked this, he said this" kind of language and just report on Woodle's opinions and such. In other words, it's not important that the spacer's conversation is what spurred these revelations; just tell us the revelations. Also, no quotes? ~ SavageBob 07:47, December 1, 2010 (UTC)- The conversation is directly with Kulton. The protocol droid only says that Master Kulton is a retired freighter captain and that his master only speaks Mon Calamarian. Fixed up the second paragraph and added a quote. OLIOSTER (talk) 07:55, December 1, 2010 (UTC)
OK, so does that mean the assumption is that the player speaks Mon Calamarian too? I guess I'm confused, since it sounds like the droids says, "This guy only speaks this language that you probably don't," but then the player has a conversation with the guy without the droid's help anyway. ~ SavageBob 15:52, December 1, 2010 (UTC)
- The conversation is directly with Kulton. The protocol droid only says that Master Kulton is a retired freighter captain and that his master only speaks Mon Calamarian. Fixed up the second paragraph and added a quote. OLIOSTER (talk) 07:55, December 1, 2010 (UTC)
D'oh... Despite my support above, I just noticed the infobox is unsourced. I'm sure it's all from SWG, but I think it must be done per the rules. ~ SavageBob 21:49, December 1, 2010 (UTC)He doesn't seem to be purple. He has the Ackbar-ish dark brown on my monitor? Darth Morrt 09:52, December 12, 2010 (UTC)
Can you reword some of the article so that it seems less like verbatim quoting of what he says in the game? The end of the first paragraph is identical to the leading quote, and things like "could all rot" would probably be better put in your own words.Menkooroo 03:30, January 3, 2011 (UTC)
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