- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a comprehensive article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Kubindian royal jelly roll
- Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 20:23, September 10, 2014 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: I think I'd probably actually eat this...
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Ew. Lots of protein, though. Corellian Premier
The Force will be with you always 01:26, September 17, 2014 (UTC)- 501st dogma(talk) 19:41, September 17, 2014 (UTC)
Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 22:07, September 26, 2014 (UTC)
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Exiled Jedi
From the quote, I can see that it was served in slices. Please mention this in the article.- Done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:27, September 21, 2014 (UTC)
In the sources section, you do not italicize Dining at Dex's, while you do so in the references and body. Please be consistent.Sorry didn't realized it wasn't italicized by the template automatically. Fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:27, September 21, 2014 (UTC)
You need a first mentioned tag in the sources section.- Done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:27, September 21, 2014 (UTC)
Does it say that Besalisks could eat the food?--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 22:59, September 20, 2014 (UTC)
- I did think about if I should count that or not. Dex describes it as scrumptious in his personal description of it, although that could just be made up to sell it I guess. I'm happy to remove it if you don't think so. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:27, September 21, 2014 (UTC)
- After looking over the source again, I noticed that the introduction says that Dex included the recipes that the most delicious out of the ones he had encountered in the galaxy, so its fine. You will need to go and add this information to all of your previous Dining at Dex's articles. You also need to make sure that all of the bodies mention that Besalisks could eat the food. The best way to do this would be to say that Dex was a Besalisk and it was a food he enjoyed or something similar.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 22:07, September 26, 2014 (UTC)
- After looking over the source again, I noticed that the introduction says that Dex included the recipes that the most delicious out of the ones he had encountered in the galaxy, so its fine. You will need to go and add this information to all of your previous Dining at Dex's articles. You also need to make sure that all of the bodies mention that Besalisks could eat the food. The best way to do this would be to say that Dex was a Besalisk and it was a food he enjoyed or something similar.--Exiled Jedi
- I did think about if I should count that or not. Dex describes it as scrumptious in his personal description of it, although that could just be made up to sell it I guess. I'm happy to remove it if you don't think so. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:27, September 21, 2014 (UTC)