Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Krane

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Krane

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The page is missing information from several of the Force echoes that you can find in the game on Zeffo Lewisr (talk) 23:03, 3 March 2022 (UTC)
- Rewatched the force echoes, what I added just now should be everything. AmazinglyCool (talk) 23:44, 3 March 2022 (UTC)
  - Not entirely, I would recommend checking them again, and checking the databank in the game for them as well too Lewisr (talk) 23:49, 3 March 2022 (UTC)
    - I made sure to check everything throughly. AmazinglyCool (talk) 19:50, 4 March 2022 (UTC)
      - I don't think you could have, there's one where seemingly another person has enquired about the artifact being missing and Krane tells them to not worry about as she would deal with it herself Lewisr (talk) 19:50, 5 March 2022 (UTC)
        When I listened to that echo, I felt that it was included under the "she attempted to keep it for herself" but I went on ahead and added it.
~~You can add a quote to the biography section.~~ Lewisr (talk) 19:50, 5 March 2022 (UTC)
- Added a quote. AmazinglyCool (talk) 20:59, 5 March 2022 (UTC)

Gender should be pipelinked in the bio
Project Auger should be included in "affiliations"
There are two separate date ref notes.Fan26 (Talk) 03:03, 4 March 2022 (UTC)
- Fixed all. AmazinglyCool (talk) 19:50, 4 March 2022 (UTC)

~~There are 128 words in the body: Please remove sectioning.~~
~~Aside from removing one of the date notes, as Fan pointed out, please merge the date and the place of death ref per large precedent.~~ LucaRoR ^(Talk) 05:28, 4 March 2022 (UTC)
- Fixed all. AmazinglyCool (talk) 19:50, 4 March 2022 (UTC)
  - Please mention Zeffo in the note. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 19:08, 5 March 2022 (UTC)
    - Mentioned Zeffo. AmazinglyCool (talk) 19:19, 5 March 2022 (UTC)
~~After the expansion, there are more than 165 words in the body, so I'm afraid sectioning is now required.~~ LucaRoR ^(Talk) 19:08, 5 March 2022 (UTC)
- I have sectioned the body now. AmazinglyCool (talk) 19:19, 5 March 2022 (UTC)

Seems like humanoid is infobox/description-only atm, can it be added to the bio? Same with Krane's gender, is only pipelinked to a pronoum at the moment.
The intro and description seem to conflict slightly in wording. Was she placed in charge of Auger, or take/force command it over for herself?
"However, this endeavor made her reckless and when hiding the relic in a cave she became trapped when it collapsed, dying." Seems to read a bit run-on, I'm not sure if it's just where the punctuation is placed or otherwise.
It might suit nicely to add one more sentence to the intro, maybe something about her death.—spookywilloww^talk 04:20, 10 March 2022 (UTC)
- Adressed. AmazinglyCool (talk) 21:55, 10 March 2022 (UTC)

I would like to request the closing of this nomination as it has reached the 250-word limit and I may not yet nominate it for a GAN as all my spots are filled. AmazinglyCool (talk) 21:55, 10 March 2022 (UTC)