Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Korsk

Nominated by: 501st dogma ( talk ) 14:39, November 22, 2014 (UTC)
Nomination comments: Repopulate the CAN page!

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Korsk

Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:19, December 1, 2014 (UTC)
Although I noticed that the use of an accent on "creche" is inconsistent. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 00:37, December 8, 2014 (UTC)
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Supreme Emperor (talk) 06:52, January 4, 2015 (UTC)

~~Context for the Yuuzhan Vong War.~~ Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:37, November 22, 2014 (UTC)
- Added.
A bit nit-picky but is the last sentence worded correctly? Shouldn't it be something like "leading Yim to realize that it was her own personality that had been imparted onto Veila during the shaping". The she herself bit just sounds slightly odd. Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:37, November 22, 2014 (UTC)
- Tweaked, as it was reading weird. Thanks for the review. 501st dogma^(talk) 02:03, November 23, 2014 (UTC)

~~Is there a way to reword the last sentence? Without context on what shaping is and that Tahiri was shaped it doesn't make sense.~~ Supreme Emperor (talk) 15:46, December 28, 2014 (UTC)
- Eh, any better now?
  - I reworded it a bit, how does it look? Supreme Emperor (talk) 06:30, January 3, 2015 (UTC)
    - Yeah, splitting the sentence works. 501st dogma^(talk) 13:51, January 3, 2015 (UTC)
~~Is there no mention of them in the CSWE?~~ Supreme Emperor (talk) 15:48, December 28, 2014 (UTC)
- Nope. 501st dogma^(talk) 00:24, December 30, 2014 (UTC)