Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Klynan

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Klynan

  • Nominated by: ThrawnChiss7 Mitth symbol Assembly Cupola 22:33, 26 April 2023 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:
  • Date Archived: 20:32, 20 May 2023 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 71 words (0 introduction, 39 body, 32 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:THR WP:AST

(3 ECs/0 Users/3 Total)

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Support

  1. ECvote JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 18:37, 18 May 2023 (UTC)
  2. ECvote Ayrehead02 (talk) 07:02, 19 May 2023 (UTC)
  3. ECvote Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 20:11, 20 May 2023 (UTC)

Object

Fan
  • "a nasty job" I'm assuming this is lifted from the text, but it needs to be reworded to fit an encyclopedic tone. Fan26 (Talk) 22:53, 26 April 2023 (UTC)
    • Yea it is; reworded "nasty" to "unpleasant", i don't know anyway to reword the word "job". ThrawnChiss7 Mitth symbol Assembly Cupola 23:01, 26 April 2023 (UTC)
  • Can the timeframe be narrowed down? The High Republic: Path of Deceit apparently takes place in 382 BBY, so I assume at the very least this can be said to have happened by then. Fan26 (Talk) 01:45, 27 April 2023 (UTC)
Macaroni
Branan
  • Can the second sentence get a quick rearrange to make Klynan the focus? Something like "By 382 BBY, Yana Ro had an unpleasant job…" Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 11:05, 13 May 2023 (UTC)
    • Rearranged. I know it is weird, but technically all we know about the job on Klynan is that it was "nasty" not that Yana Ro participated in the job. ThrawnChiss7 Mitth symbol Assembly Cupola 20:15, 18 May 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 20:31, 20 May 2023 (UTC)