Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Klossi Anno's master

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Contents

  • 1 Klossi Anno's master
    • 1.1 (3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)
      • 1.1.1 Support
      • 1.1.2 Object
        • 1.1.2.1 SE
      • 1.1.3 Comments
        • 1.1.3.1 Manoof

Klossi Anno's master

  • Nominated by: Clone Commander Lee Talk 22:32, March 11, 2014 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: 1.

(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)

Support

  1. ECvote Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:12, March 14, 2014 (UTC)
  2. Manoof (talk) 09:44, March 18, 2014 (UTC)
  3. ECvote 501st dogma(talk) 01:30, March 25, 2014 (UTC)
  4. ECvote Supreme Emperor (talk) 15:13, March 28, 2014 (UTC)

Object

  • You mention the master sacrificed his life... was he a he or was he a she? or do we not know? Manoof (talk) 02:58, March 17, 2014 (UTC)
    • Good catch, no we don't. Clone Commander Lee Talk 11:40, March 17, 2014 (UTC)
      • Looks great! Manoof (talk) 09:44, March 18, 2014 (UTC)
SE
  • Can you add in the release month? Supreme Emperor (talk) 15:47, March 24, 2014 (UTC)
    • Done. Clone Commander Lee Talk 16:01, March 24, 2014 (UTC)
  • Can you give a bit more context on Order 66? Supreme Emperor (talk) 03:28, March 26, 2014 (UTC)
    • Added. Clone Commander Lee Talk 10:59, March 26, 2014 (UTC)
      • Can you reword a bit more? I'd like it to say something about Order 66 meaning all Jedi were to be immediately executed. Supreme Emperor (talk) 14:40, March 27, 2014 (UTC)
        • I would, but then the Context for the Order would be bigger than the rest of the article. Not sure if that is appropriate. Clone Commander Lee Talk 14:47, March 27, 2014 (UTC)
          • Perhaps something like this. "when Contingency Order 66, an order to kill all Jedi, was initiated " Supreme Emperor (talk) 14:57, March 28, 2014 (UTC)
            • Have a look. Clone Commander Lee Talk 15:03, March 28, 2014 (UTC)
              • Can you change it a little bit more? I'd like to see the context given immediately after Order 66, like my suggestion. Supreme Emperor (talk) 15:08, March 28, 2014 (UTC)
                • Fine? Clone Commander Lee Talk 15:11, March 28, 2014 (UTC)
                  • Perfect :P Supreme Emperor (talk) 15:13, March 28, 2014 (UTC)

Comments

  1. This applies to the below as well: any other info about their death, or was it just briefly mentioned that it happened? Corellian PremierJedi symbolThe Force will be with you always 21:48, March 13, 2014 (UTC)
    • No, just that they were killed protecting their apprentice and vice versa. Clone Commander Lee Talk 22:04, March 13, 2014 (UTC)
Manoof