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Kiwu family

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Support

  1. Assuming Braha and Samonic's objections are addressed VergenceScatter (talk) 19:43, 5 September 2022 (UTC)
  2. ECvote JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 04:35, 14 September 2022 (UTC)
  3. Assuming Braha's objection is addressed. Samonic Signatureicon (Talk) 20:48, 14 September 2022 (UTC)
  4. ECvote Sorry I'm late guys :P Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 09:52, 15 September 2022 (UTC)
  5. ECvote Commander Code-8 Hello There! 03:57, 19 September 2022 (UTC)

Object

Vergence family
  • Please add |translated=1 to the {{Quote}} template, as it's not spoken in Basic.
  • I'd suggest adding that Picket Force 6 and the Vigilant were part of the Chiss Defense Fleet (or whatever it's called — I can never remember)
  • Please link to the victory against the Paataatus (normally linking is a sofixit but in this case I don't know what battle it's referring to)
  • Not exactly sure of the precedent on this, but I believe Roscu's full name should be given. VergenceScatter (talk) 02:29, 5 September 2022 (UTC)
    • Sorry to interject, but precent is that Roscu's full name should be given. Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol 12:35, 5 September 2022 (UTC)
      • all done
Braha
  • There is no linkage to the Clarr family or any context to its mention. Please revise. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 09:18, 5 September 2022 (UTC)
  • Going back to Roscu, the wording "other crewmembers" implies that they're a crewmember of the Vigilant, something that isn't the case in other articles. Can there be some more context about the captain and Sposia? Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 08:59, 12 September 2022 (UTC)
Samonic
  • Wutroow being notable is POV, please remove that.
  • Following shouldn't be capitalized.
  • Context for the Paataatus. (examples)
  • Jixtus isn't warlike, he's a member of a warlike species, please reword.
  • No mention of who Ba'kif is affiliated with.
  • 40 should be forty. Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol 12:38, 5 September 2022 (UTC)
  • You should probably specify the Paataatus-Chiss victory was a battle before mentioning it as such.
  • Full names for Roscu and Wutroow in the quote please.
  • Does Lesser Evil identify Sposia as a planet? Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol 20:00, 5 September 2022 (UTC)
    • done, leaving it as core names for ease of reader, and yes it does BloodOfIrizi Sabine Starbird (talk) 22:38, 5 September 2022 (UTC)
      • Sorry, but full names are required per precedent. Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol 11:30, 8 September 2022 (UTC)
        • per discord discussions and no official rulings, i will be leaving the core names BloodOfIrizi Sabine Starbird (talk) 18:32, 9 September 2022 (UTC)
          • Striking for now since there is no policy on this as of now. Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol 19:35, 9 September 2022 (UTC)
  • Shouldn't Syndic be capitalized?
  • Please remove the category "Chiss families" as "Chiss Great Families" is more specific and is a subcategory of the former. Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol 18:12, 11 September 2022 (UTC)
    • both done BloodOfIrizi Sabine Starbird (talk) 23:59, 11 September 2022 (UTC)
      • My mistake, I checked Lesser Evil and syndic shouldn't be capitalized. I've changed it. Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol 12:38, 12 September 2022 (UTC)
  • The Kiwu syndic deserves a page. Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol 12:41, 12 September 2022 (UTC)
  • Missing link to core name through Wutroow.
  • Can you specify what this "chaos" is? (Chiss Ascendancy crisis) Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol 20:10, 12 September 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 03:57, 19 September 2022 (UTC)