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Kilji Overlords

  • Nominated by: — Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol 09:37, 4 April 2022 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: The Kilji overlords have affirmed my decision to nominate this article. See here for the topic's mention in the book.
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Support

  1. ThrawnChiss7 (talk) 01:43, 5 April 2022 (UTC)
  2. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 16:02, 5 April 2022 (UTC)
  3. ECvote Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 00:08, 16 April 2022 (UTC)
  4. ECvote Fan26 (Talk) 15:19, 20 April 2022 (UTC)
  5. ECvote OOM 224 22:06, 21 April 2022 (UTC)

Object

Braha
  • "They affirmed the Generalirius' decisions." This sentence caught me off-guard at first, since Generalirius is a new term for me. Are you able to rewrite the sentence in order to give some context for the Generalirius?
  • "when the ruler of the Illumine, Generalirius Nakirre, decided to accompany his ally, Jixtus, an agent of the Grysk Hegemony—the warlike Grysk species' nation—the Kilji Overlords affirmed his decision" accompany Jixtus for what? Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 14:30, 4 April 2022 (UTC)
    • All done.— Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol 09:49, 5 April 2022 (UTC)
Fan
  • The first sentence requires rewording. "the government of" instead of "the Kiji Illumine's government"
  • Why did Nakirre want to kill Jixtus, and why did recalling the Overlords' affirmation convince him not to? The article currently offers no explanation for this. Fan26 (Talk) 14:40, 4 April 2022 (UTC)
    • Addressed. The second one can't be solved as the source material doesn't share any insight on that, sadly. Thank you.— Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol 18:03, 4 April 2022 (UTC)
Manoof
  • You need to note that Jixtus is a Grysk himself, not just an agent of the Hegemony as it makes this later bit vague "Nakirre wanted to kill the Grysk" Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 10:09, 15 April 2022 (UTC)
    • I made a slight tweak to just say kill Jixtus, as I realised it could read that he wanted to commit genocide lol Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 00:08, 16 April 2022 (UTC)
      • Well... He did not like Grysks... :P — Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol 07:30, 18 April 2022 (UTC)
  • Can we link Kilji path somewhere, I'm guessing that's the belief that was mocked? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 10:09, 15 April 2022 (UTC)
    • Done. The link is already there "Beliefs -> Kilji path" — Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol 15:26, 15 April 2022 (UTC)
      • Again, not sure how I missed that, sorry. As long as it's there right? lol Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 00:08, 16 April 2022 (UTC)

Comments

  • [Nakirre wants to kill Jixtus]...But Nakirre had agreed to travel here with the alien, and the Kilji Overlords had affirmed his decision, and so here they were...[Jixtus continues to mock and insult the Illumine/Nakirre/the Kilji vassals]. — Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol 09:37, 4 April 2022 (UTC)

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 22:06, 21 April 2022 (UTC)