Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Ketsu Onyo's informant

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Ketsu Onyo's informant

  • Nominated by: Wok142 (talk) 23:34, 30 January 2025 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:
  • Date Archived: 21:32, 10 February 2025 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 206 words (0 introduction, 163 body, 43 behind the scenes)
  • Word count at nomination time: 174 words (0 introduction, 130 body, 44 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:Rebels

(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)

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Support

  1. NanoLuukeCloning Facility 13:30, 5 February 2025 (UTC)
  2. ECvote Lewisr (talk) 05:39, 8 February 2025 (UTC)
  3. ECvote CometSmudge (talk) 22:33, 8 February 2025 (UTC)
  4. ECvote —spookywillowwtalk 21:32, 10 February 2025 (UTC)

Object

Lew
  • Sabine's pronouns aren't citable to the short Lewisr (talk) 00:51, 6 February 2025 (UTC)
  • Think it'd be worth giving the location (Garel) Lewisr (talk) 00:51, 6 February 2025 (UTC)
    • Got these two. Wok142 (talk) 07:47, 6 February 2025 (UTC)
  • Similar to Unidentified Chadra-Fan youngling, I do think it should be noted that Maz later recounted the story Lewisr (talk) 00:51, 6 February 2025 (UTC)
    • Hope that's sufficient. Wok142 (talk) 08:07, 6 February 2025 (UTC)
  • The BTS should be updated to note it was first mentioned in the volume Lewisr (talk) 00:51, 6 February 2025 (UTC)
    • This BTS is confusing me. Do I technically not even need to mention Crash Course as a standalone episode then since it just the same content from the tv special? Wok142 (talk) 08:07, 6 February 2025 (UTC)
      • Personally I don't think it's necessary, but if you wanted to say it was later released as a standalone episode on [air date] then you're welcome to I guess Lewisr (talk) 20:05, 6 February 2025 (UTC)
        • Ok then I will leave as is. Wok142 (talk) 17:56, 7 February 2025 (UTC)
  • The cites for Garel being a planet, Sabine's pronouns, and Maz being a pirate queen can be all be changed to Star Wars Encyclopedia: The Comprehensive Guide to the Star Wars Galaxy so it is all to one instead of 3 different ones Lewisr (talk) 20:05, 6 February 2025 (UTC)
    • Consolidated. Wok142 (talk) 17:56, 7 February 2025 (UTC)

Comments

  • Reasoning for my copy-edit: "informed" felt that given the topic and the redondance of the word "informant" in the article, it was weird to also use this verb, though now "told" is used twice in proximity, so… I modified the Dialogue both to align with the template documentation example and because I felt the description in attr was redundant and not providing useful context, and I also thought that "mission" was a bit too formal. NanoLuukeCloning Facility 13:30, 5 February 2025 (UTC)
    • Thanks for the reasoning, I agree your judgement in all such cases. Wok142 (talk) 20:09, 5 February 2025 (UTC)

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 21:32, 10 February 2025 (UTC)