Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Karazak

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Karazak

  • Nominated by: Zed42 (talk) 09:01, December 8, 2019 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: I meant to nominate this awhile back, but then it surprisingly received a couple of passing mentions.

(3 ECs/0 Users/3 Total)

Support

  1. ECvote Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:59, December 8, 2019 (UTC)
  2. ECvote Fan26 (Talk) 16:58, December 10, 2019 (UTC)
  3. ECvote TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 00:54, December 12, 2019 (UTC)

Object

Ayrehead
  • You need to specify in the first paragraph that it first appeared in the new canon in those sources, as the current statement isn't technically true. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:45, December 8, 2019 (UTC)
    • My bad, done. Zed42 (talk) 09:54, December 8, 2019 (UTC)
  • I would re-word the sentence on slavery. I don't think the use of despite quite makes sense as a government tolerating something doesn't suggest they wouldn't regulate it. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:45, December 8, 2019 (UTC)
    • Is that wording better? Zed42 (talk) 09:54, December 8, 2019 (UTC)
Anil
  • As the source states that the smuggler ring resided on Karazak, I believe it's fair to assume that it was a terrestrial astronomical object.
    • I had initially made this assumption, but removed it awhile back. Added it again. Zed42 (talk) 22:36, December 11, 2019 (UTC)
  • Is there any information on why the Whitedrift Exchange went to Karazak in the book? Also, as far as I can see, the novel says that the station served as a mobile trading post, which can be added to this article.
    • Added. And no, there isn't really any reason given, aside from the fact that the Whitedrift Exchange just travels around the galaxy, serving as a trading post/home for passengers. Zed42 (talk) 22:36, December 11, 2019 (UTC)
  • I don't think the release month of The Force Awakens Beginner Game can be sourced to that FFG article, as the article only states that the game was "scheduled to arrive to retailers in the third quarter of 2016." TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 22:04, December 11, 2019 (UTC)
    • Found a different article. Zed42 (talk) 22:36, December 11, 2019 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 05:24, December 16, 2019 (UTC)