Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Kanan Jarrus' father

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Kanan Jarrus' father

  • Nominated by: Wok142 (talk) 08:44, 1 January 2025 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:
  • Date Archived: 03:32, 21 January 2025 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 278 words (47 introduction, 213 body, 18 behind the scenes)
  • Word count at nomination time: 252 words (35 introduction, 199 body, 18 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:Novels WP:Rebels

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  1. ECvote CometSmudge (talk) 04:23, 20 January 2025 (UTC)

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JocastaBot
  • Current word count violates Comprehensive requirements: total word count exceeds 250 words. JocastaBot (talk) 08:45, 1 January 2025 (UTC)

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Comet
  • Instead of saying 8 years after the rise of the Empire, I think it would be better to use a BBY date. I think the Jedi Order's fall should also be dated
  • Missing a pronoun cat CometSmudge (talk) 17:56, 19 January 2025 (UTC)
    • Got these both. Wok142 (talk) 18:48, 19 January 2025 (UTC)
Nano
  • In the current state of the article, I do not think it is necessary to mention Garson, a "the father-like role". Anything that concern Garson is about the concept of fatherhood while the article is about a specific individual. While it is relevant to Kanan, it is no relevant to his father himself, the subject of the article, unless if A New Dawn happen to mention that Kanan relationship with Garson made Kanan think about his own father, but I'm not seeing that based on my reading of the article. Furthermore, if indeed the sentences related to Garson are removed, the sentence "Although Jarrus would not remember his father, he thought about his father on multiple occasions in his adult life." should be modified, as the article would only mention one occasion Kanan thought explicitly about his parents, during the exchange with Ezra. NanoLuukeCloning Facility 13:29, 20 January 2025 (UTC)

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