Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Kalasaad Woztu

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Kalasaad Woztu

• Nominated by: Darth Karika^{will destroy your planet!} 13:55, September 24, 2010 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Part 2

(1 ECs/3 Users/4 Total)

Support

1. I feel lucky. Menkooroo 00:50, October 4, 2010 (UTC)
2. Menk loves me. 1358 ^(Talk) 16:39, October 9, 2010 (UTC)
3. No whammies no whammies no whammies stop! ~ SavageBob 05:53, October 24, 2010 (UTC)
4. --Tm_T ^(Talk) 07:27, October 29, 2010 (UTC)

Object

1. Xd1358
   • "…the Outer Rim[2] planet Vorzyd V, a world famous for…" What? A world famous what? Also, do we really say world famous in the Star Wars universe?
   • "…including as the amusement park…" Improper English.
   • In the future, please make sure to proofread your work. 1358 ^(Talk) 21:00, October 1, 2010 (UTC)
     • Both fixed. Darth Karika^{will destroy your planet!} 23:20, October 1, 2010 (UTC)
     • Sorry to butt in --- that first sentence actually said a world famous for... as in, it's a planet famous for its gambling. :^D Menkooroo 15:12, October 3, 2010 (UTC)
       • Ah, I hate myself now. >_< 1358 ^(Talk) 16:59, October 4, 2010 (UTC)
         • But I love you, and that's all that matters. Nothing on Vorzyd V (a world famous for its gambling) can keep us apart! Menkooroo 00:24, October 6, 2010 (UTC)

1. Whoa!
   • Right now, the majority of the article is sourced to The Essential Atlas and its online companion. The sourcing should look like: "Kalasaad Woztu was, in 22 BBY, the Prime Minister of the[1] Outer Rim[2] planet Vorzyd V ... and the beaches of the[1] Inner Rim[3] planet Amfar..." Currently, info from the Holonet Article is sourced to the Atlas. Menkooroo 15:12, October 3, 2010 (UTC)
     • Fixed. Darth Karika^{will destroy your planet!} 21:44, October 3, 2010 (UTC)

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