Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Kala

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Kala

• Nominated by: JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 00:03, 13 June 2023 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:
• Date Archived: 02:11, 2 July 2023 (UTC)
• Final word count: 165 words (0 introduction, 141 body, 24 behind the scenes)
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:THR, WP:WOMEN, WP:NOVELS

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Support

1. Lewisr (talk) 13:39, 15 June 2023 (UTC)
2. —spookywilloww^talk 08:21, 18 June 2023 (UTC)
3. Fan26 (Talk) 22:19, 1 July 2023 (UTC)

Object

spookly

• "She talked with the Path of the Open Hand Force religion..." - would it suit to say member of the religion? The phrasing at the moment suggests she talked with the religion itself, which read odd to me, though I'm unfamiliar with the context of this source.—spookywilloww^talk 08:40, 17 June 2023 (UTC)
  • I don't think it's necessarily weird to say that someone spoke with an organization, like "I just got off the phone with the airline" or whatever - what do you think? JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 04:08, 18 June 2023 (UTC)
    • I think it's dependent on case. For an irl example to compare, something similar to "she talked with the Christian religion" seems unusual, whereas "she talked with members of the Christian religion" seems like it flows better.—spookywilloww^talk 04:11, 18 June 2023 (UTC)
      • I suppose when context is given for the organization following its name then using it in that way sounds off - changed. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 04:20, 18 June 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 22:19, 1 July 2023 (UTC)