- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a Comprehensive article nomination that was unsuccessful. Please do not modify it.
Junus
- Nominated by: Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 18:04, February 14, 2020 (UTC)
- Nomination comments:
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Spooky
I believe that Fortress Vader should be established to be on Mustafar, with the relevant context.—spookywillowwtalk 18:14, February 14, 2020 (UTC)- Done. Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 18:33, February 14, 2020 (UTC)
Zed
Even if we don't know what happened to Junus specifically, you should mention that the garrison was wiped out by the Mustafarian army.Zed42 (talk) 18:34, February 14, 2020 (UTC)- Done. Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 19:31, February 14, 2020 (UTC)
- Could you reword the introduction so that "Galactic Empire" is mentioned in full rather than having two successive instances of "Imperial"? Zed42 (talk) 19:49, February 14, 2020 (UTC)
- Done. Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 19:58, February 14, 2020 (UTC)
Anil
You should create a Personality and traits section mentioning Junus's reaction to the Mustafarian attack. You can also add that he spoke Basic.
Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 17:55, February 15, 2020 (UTC)I believe there is enough room for an image of the Battle of Fortress Vader or something like that. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 18:00, February 15, 2020 (UTC)
- Both addressed. Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 10:15, February 16, 2020 (UTC)
- You didn't add the Basic part. Also, based on the punctuation of the quote, I believe we can say that he hesitated to suggest evacuation. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 15:02, February 16, 2020 (UTC)
- My bad. Added. Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 15:40, February 16, 2020 (UTC)
- You didn't add the Basic part. Also, based on the punctuation of the quote, I believe we can say that he hesitated to suggest evacuation.
- Both addressed. Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 10:15, February 16, 2020 (UTC)
Comments
- Adding the personality and traits section has pushed the word count over 250. Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 15:40, February 16, 2020 (UTC)
- Well, with your request, I can close this nomination so you can nominate it for GA status instead.
Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 16:26, February 16, 2020 (UTC)
- Yes that seems like best option, if you would like to do the honors. Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 19:37, February 16, 2020 (UTC)
- Well, with your request, I can close this nomination so you can nominate it for GA status instead.
- Nomination closed at the request of the nominator. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 23:43, February 16, 2020 (UTC)