Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Jixuan desert

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Contents

  • 1 Jixuan desert
    • 1.1 (3 ECs/2 Users/5 Total)
      • 1.1.1 Support
      • 1.1.2 Object
        • 1.1.2.1 Manoof
      • 1.1.3 Comments

Jixuan desert

  • Nominated by: Erebus Chronus (Talk) 22:44, 17 August 2022 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:
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(3 ECs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol 22:50, 17 August 2022 (UTC)
  2. Dentface (talk) 07:31, 18 August 2022 (UTC)
  3. ECvote Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 09:28, 18 August 2022 (UTC)
  4. ECvote Fan26 (Talk) 18:54, 24 August 2022 (UTC)
  5. ECvote Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 07:46, 7 September 2022 (UTC)

Object

Manoof
  • Liberty on Ryloth states that Obi-Wan liberated other villages, so could we say "following their engagements with the Separatist Droid Army in the settlement of Nabat and other villages." To make it clear that Nabat was not the only attack. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:15, 27 August 2022 (UTC)
    • Added.
  • Can you clarify how the desert appears in Storm over ryloth? As far as I can se, it's not clear that Nabat is in the desert and the scenes shown in the newsreel are from that village, orbital scenes would be a stretch to say the desert is depicted since we dont have a frame of reference (or clear location details) Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:15, 27 August 2022 (UTC)
    • Mistake. Erebus Chronus (Talk) 13:47, 6 September 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 07:49, 7 September 2022 (UTC)