- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a comprehensive article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Jet-wing
- Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:10, January 8, 2014 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: A brief break from creatures
(3 ECs/0 Users/3 Total)
Support
501st dogma(talk) 14:59, January 11, 2014 (UTC)- Supreme Emperor (talk) 03:42, February 9, 2014 (UTC)
- Exiled Jedi
(Greetings) 00:10, February 10, 2014 (UTC)
Object
- 501st
"...jet-wings to avoid the sensors of the Separatist lead craft and breach its shields..." Could you elaborate a bit on what it is the lead of?501st dogma(talk) 22:41, January 8, 2014 (UTC)- Changed Ayrehead02 (talk) 00:00, January 9, 2014 (UTC)
- The sentence is run-on now. Break it up. 501st dogma(talk) 22:33, January 9, 2014 (UTC)
- Done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:43, January 11, 2014 (UTC)
- The sentence is run-on now. Break it up. 501st dogma(talk) 22:33, January 9, 2014 (UTC)
- Changed Ayrehead02 (talk) 00:00, January 9, 2014 (UTC)
- SE
After they breached the shields, how were they destroyed?Supreme Emperor (talk) 05:17, January 21, 2014 (UTC)- It isn't really clear, they just kind of explode after the Jedi get out and move away. Ayrehead02 (talk) 20:22, January 21, 2014 (UTC)
Date for the battle?- Nothing more exact than during the Clone Wars. Ayrehead02 (talk) 20:11, February 2, 2014 (UTC)
- The article for the battle has it c.21 BBY, sourced to Star Wars Annual 2011. Would you mind quickly looking into it to see if a date can be found? Supreme Emperor (talk) 04:56, February 4, 2014 (UTC)
- Hmm sadly I don't have access to the annual but looking at the page it says that it dates the entire Clone Wars series to c. 21 BBY and I suppose the dating for the battle is based on that. I'm not sure thats enough to date the battle though since the Clone Wars certainly ran into later years of the war after the annual was published. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:01, February 6, 2014 (UTC)
- I'll strike and support, if you get a chance, maybe a date can be found. Supreme Emperor (talk) 03:42, February 9, 2014 (UTC)
- Hmm sadly I don't have access to the annual but looking at the page it says that it dates the entire Clone Wars series to c. 21 BBY and I suppose the dating for the battle is based on that. I'm not sure thats enough to date the battle though since the Clone Wars certainly ran into later years of the war after the annual was published. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:01, February 6, 2014 (UTC)
- The article for the battle has it c.21 BBY, sourced to Star Wars Annual 2011. Would you mind quickly looking into it to see if a date can be found? Supreme Emperor (talk) 04:56, February 4, 2014 (UTC)
- Nothing more exact than during the Clone Wars. Ayrehead02 (talk) 20:11, February 2, 2014 (UTC)
Can you clarify what kind of vehicles the Jedi were originally using?Supreme Emperor (talk) 05:07, January 28, 2014 (UTC)- Nope they just say something like are ships are refueling. Ayrehead02 (talk) 20:11, February 2, 2014 (UTC)
Exiled Jedi
Should "Jet-wing" be capitalized or not? You have it both ways in the article body.- De-capitalised. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:25, February 9, 2014 (UTC)
I think you could describe the vehicle more. The cockpit is open to the air and I think you describe more about the wings and how they are connected to the body of the vehicle.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 04:26, February 9, 2014 (UTC)
- Added, although I'm not sure what to call the bits connecting the wings. I've said struts but if you can't think of a better word I'll happily change it. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:25, February 9, 2014 (UTC)
Comments
- The article currently has a ground vehicle infobox which doesn't suit it, but I have no idea what to change it to. It isn't an aquatic, ground or repulsor lift vehicle and isn't a starship which are all of the vehicle infoboxes I can find. Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:12, January 8, 2014 (UTC)