Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Jestefad

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Jestefad

• Nominated by: Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 17:12, 21 June 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:

(0 ECs/0 Users/0 Total)

(Votes required: 2 EC vote(s) required to reach minimum. Additional 3 user or 1 EC vote required to pass.)

Support

Object

CC-8

• The second sentence feels like it's covering too much, should be split up
• "constantly trying to make Mustafar into its moon" Does the source personify the planet like this?
• "Several centuries ago" is too OOU. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 10:04, 23 June 2021 (UTC)

Comments

• Taking down per nominator request OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 16:10, 28 June 2021 (UTC)