Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Jaran fur

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Contents

  • 1 Jaran fur
    • 1.1 (3 ECs/0 Users/3 Total)
      • 1.1.1 Support
      • 1.1.2 Object
        • 1.1.2.1 Fan
        • 1.1.2.2 AC
        • 1.1.2.3 spookly
      • 1.1.3 Comments

Jaran fur

  • Nominated by: ThrawnChiss7 Mitth symbol Assembly Cupola 01:26, 27 April 2023 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:
  • Date Archived: 18:08, 22 May 2023 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 71 words (0 introduction, 43 body, 28 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:THR

(3 ECs/0 Users/3 Total)

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Support

  1. ECvote Copy-edit Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 11:31, 13 May 2023 (UTC)
  2. ECvote Fan26 (Talk) 19:14, 15 May 2023 (UTC)
  3. ECvote Ayrehead02 (talk) 07:05, 19 May 2023 (UTC)

Object

Fan
  • "Treze's voice sounded similar to the softest jaran fur." to whom did Treze's voice sound like the fur? I doubt it was an objective fact that his voice sounded like Japan fur, rather that someone felt it did. Fan26 (Talk) 23:33, 29 April 2023 (UTC)
    • The book does not specify; it says "His voice was like the softest jaran fur, and he smiled gently." ThrawnChiss7 Mitth symbol Assembly Cupola 00:16, 30 April 2023 (UTC)
      • Whose perspective is the scene from? Fan26 (Talk) 23:31, 30 April 2023 (UTC)
        • It's kind of ambiguous: It could be Treze's perspective or it could be the dockmaster. ThrawnChiss7 Mitth symbol Assembly Cupola 21:34, 8 May 2023 (UTC)
AC
  • You should specify on what astronomical object the port is located. AmazinglyCool Nightsisters symbol - JFO (talk) 00:33, 11 May 2023 (UTC)
    • Specified. ThrawnChiss7 Mitth symbol Assembly Cupola 01:13, 11 May 2023 (UTC)
spookly
  • Seems like the source's Phase could be mentioned in the BtS (unsure if that requires a separate reference or not, I know it depends on which THR source it is).—spookywillowwtalk 17:24, 13 May 2023 (UTC)
    • Added. ThrawnChiss7 Mitth symbol Assembly Cupola 18:00, 22 May 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 18:02, 22 May 2023 (UTC)