Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Jaran fur

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Jaran fur

• Nominated by: ThrawnChiss7 ^{Assembly Cupola} 01:26, 27 April 2023 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:
• Date Archived: 18:08, 22 May 2023 (UTC)
• Final word count: 71 words (0 introduction, 43 body, 28 behind the scenes)
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:THR

(3 ECs/0 Users/3 Total)

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Support

1. Copy-edit Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 11:31, 13 May 2023 (UTC)
2. Fan26 (Talk) 19:14, 15 May 2023 (UTC)
3. Ayrehead02 (talk) 07:05, 19 May 2023 (UTC)

Object

Fan

• "Treze's voice sounded similar to the softest jaran fur." to whom did Treze's voice sound like the fur? I doubt it was an objective fact that his voice sounded like Japan fur, rather that someone felt it did. Fan26 (Talk) 23:33, 29 April 2023 (UTC)
  • The book does not specify; it says "His voice was like the softest jaran fur, and he smiled gently." ThrawnChiss7 ^{Assembly Cupola} 00:16, 30 April 2023 (UTC)
    • Whose perspective is the scene from? Fan26 (Talk) 23:31, 30 April 2023 (UTC)
      • It's kind of ambiguous: It could be Treze's perspective or it could be the dockmaster. ThrawnChiss7 ^{Assembly Cupola} 21:34, 8 May 2023 (UTC)

AC

• You should specify on what astronomical object the port is located. AmazinglyCool (talk) 00:33, 11 May 2023 (UTC)
  • Specified. ThrawnChiss7 ^{Assembly Cupola} 01:13, 11 May 2023 (UTC)

spookly

• Seems like the source's Phase could be mentioned in the BtS (unsure if that requires a separate reference or not, I know it depends on which THR source it is).—spookywilloww^talk 17:24, 13 May 2023 (UTC)
  • Added. ThrawnChiss7 ^{Assembly Cupola} 18:00, 22 May 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 18:02, 22 May 2023 (UTC)