Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Jape's Jedi Master

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Jape's Jedi Master

• Nominated by: —spookywilloww^talk 23:42, 6 March 2022 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:N

(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)

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Support

1. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 05:52, 12 March 2022 (UTC)
2. Samonic (Talk) 17:46, 14 March 2022 (UTC)
3. Fan26 (Talk) 19:17, 14 March 2022 (UTC)
4. OOM 224 19:21, 14 March 2022 (UTC)

Object

Fan

• "than his boring trips" I would argue this should be reworded so it's clear it being boring is Obi-Wan's opinion of his reserarch duties. As is now the wording is as if the trips being boring was objective, not Obi-Wan's personal feelings Fan26 (Talk) 16:25, 7 March 2022 (UTC)
  • Should be clarified.—spookywilloww^talk 19:28, 7 March 2022 (UTC)

Manoof

• You don't need to specify Jape is an individual, force sensitive male is sufficient Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 09:12, 11 March 2022 (UTC)
  • Removed.
• Just wanted to check the book specifies Coruscant is a Core Worlds planet? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 09:12, 11 March 2022 (UTC)
  • Yup, it does.—spookywilloww^talk 15:19, 11 March 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 19:21, 14 March 2022 (UTC)