Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/J.J. Kirby

Nominated by: Dentface ( talk ) 08:41, 11 December 2021 (UTC)
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J.J. Kirby

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~~"Kirby served one of several pencillers…" I guess there is a typo here, but I don't know how to fix it myself.~~ LucaRoR ^(Talk) 09:22, 23 December 2021 (UTC)
- I got that, hope Dent doesn't mind :) Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:19, 23 December 2021 (UTC)

There are several sources noted which aren't clear on why they are listed. I think we should note which comics were reprinted in which publications. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:19, 23 December 2021 (UTC)
- I used the Shortstory template to try and clarify. Does that look good? Dentface (talk) 23:38, 23 December 2021 (UTC)
  - Good idea and much better. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 10:21, 26 December 2021 (UTC)
Penciller and illustrator can be added to the infobox occupations. I'd suggest in place of "comic book artist" which is a bit vague IMO but not too fussed on that point. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:19, 23 December 2021 (UTC)
- Added. Dentface (talk) 23:38, 23 December 2021 (UTC)
I think you should note specifically where/how the cover design was revealed (ie via an online article). This, and the above, may result in sectioning being required so check your wordcount. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:20, 23 December 2021 (UTC)
- Added. Word count still under 165. Dentface (talk) 23:38, 23 December 2021 (UTC)

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 03:12, 5 January 2022 (UTC)