Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/J'aahn

The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a comprehensive article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.

J'aahn

• Nominated by: Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 02:40, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:Can't think of anything...

(2 ECs/2 Users/4 Total)

Support

1. NaruHina ^Talk 04:41, July 14, 2011 (UTC)
2. Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 16:37, July 22, 2011 (UTC)
3. Here's my J'aahn H'aanc'aahk: ~Savage 22:44, August 1, 2011 (UTC)
4. Menkooroo 14:54, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Object

1. Rubedo
   • Could you look into the possibility that this character's name is a reference to Soldier of Fortune? If you can find a source saying that Raven did that intentionally, then it should be included.
     • There was rumor to that, but as far as I can see that is just speculation.
       • Do you have Microsoft Outlook working? You can send Raven Software an email about it and see if they respond. NaruHina ^Talk 22:54, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
         • I'm afraid I probably won't be able to check. Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 01:06, July 14, 2011 (UTC)
           • Oh well. NaruHina ^Talk 04:41, July 14, 2011 (UTC)
   • "the dead Sith Lord Marka Ragnos" It would probably be best to list Ragnos's death year here.
     • How's that?
   • That he was affiliated with the Imperial Remnant is infobox-only. I think that just because the Diciples are affiliated with the Remnant, that does not mean its individual members are.
     • Fixed.
   • Context on Corellia, and probably Coronet City as well.
     • Got it.
   • Since he's in the level, I assume it's possible to kill him. That needs to be noted in the BTS. If he was someone that you could not possibly win the level without killing, then that counts as a canon death.
     • You can do it either way.
   • Give the name of the company that made the game in the BTS.
     • Done.
   • Say why Jaden was sent to Corellia. He wasn't there specifically to save this train.
     • Got it.
   • You may put in a pronunciation note because of the apostrophe. (How do you pronounce those anyway? Why are they put in names? Bah.) NaruHina ^Talk 04:50, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
     • I looked on a lot of different articles and I can't find an example of what you're talking about. Could you please explain better. Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 15:04, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
       • For certain articles like Saleucami, Darth Caedus (In the BTS, but should also be in the intro), and Serroco, where the pronunciation may be taken different ways, we use the International Phonetic Alphabet chart for English dialects to say how they are pronounced. Since this character's name may be taken as either "John" or "Jan," I think making that distinction would be appropriate because there is a canonical pronunciation. NaruHina ^Talk 22:54, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
         • Ummm, is that how it should look? Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 01:06, July 14, 2011 (UTC)
           • Afraid not. I've done it for you. You should do this for Hokk too if it isn't pronounced "hawk." NaruHina ^Talk 04:41, July 14, 2011 (UTC)
             • Thanks! Hokk is actually pronounced "Hawk" Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 00:15, July 15, 2011 (UTC)
   • Were they not trying to destroy the train by blowing it up? That's not the same thing as "disabling." NaruHina ^Talk 22:54, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
     • Done. Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 01:09, July 14, 2011 (UTC)
2. Bob
   • I think perhaps you should mention something about his uniform. Was it typical of the cultists? ~Savage 17:24, July 29, 2011 (UTC)
     • Done. Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 20:37, July 29, 2011 (UTC)
       • Was his uniform "much like" the others', or identical to the others? The idea of a uniform is that it's uniform from one guy to the next! ;P ~Savage 13:59, July 31, 2011 (UTC)
         • Yea, got it. ;D Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 01:41, August 1, 2011 (UTC)
           • OK, almost there. :) Can you describe the uniform a bit? I would have done it, but the image is so dark, I can't really see it clearly. I'm thinking something like, "He wore the uniform of his cult, a brown jumpsuit with knee-high boots and a helmet" or whatever the uniform looked like. ~Savage 18:06, August 1, 2011 (UTC)
             • OK try that. XD Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 21:22, August 1, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

• Do not start a sentence with "but." NaruHina ^Talk 04:50, July 13, 2011 (UTC)