Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Irid

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Irid

• Nominated by: NaruHina ^Talk 22:35, November 19, 2011 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: There's a reason Big Bird's the only one you ever see nowadays.

(3 ECs/4 Users/7 Total)

Support

1. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 12:02, November 20, 2011 (UTC)
2. Beware! The Birds!--Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 21:33, November 20, 2011 (UTC)
3. --Eyrezer 09:22, December 4, 2011 (UTC)
4. Gethralkin^Hyperwave 17:36, December 5, 2011 (UTC)
5. Tinwe^(comlink) 07:40, December 8, 2011 (UTC)
6. Toprawa and Ralltiir 02:39, December 13, 2011 (UTC)
7. Supporting with impunity. ~Savage 16:21, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Object

1. You need to mention that their plumage was yellow, as stated in the infobox and quote. Good job.--Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 01:59, November 20, 2011 (UTC)
   • Added. NaruHina ^Talk 07:00, November 20, 2011 (UTC)
2. Tinwe
   • I think you should specify (both in the article and the infobox) that it was the underside of the wings that was yellow, as the quote states. It would be a bit of a stretch to assume the whole plumage was the same color, as it's not explicitly stated.
     • Fixed. NaruHina ^Talk 16:34, December 6, 2011 (UTC)
   • The Qui-Gon & Tahl mission took place considerably earlier than 41 BBY. It's a flashback scene (which needs be noted in the Appearances section and maybe in Bts as well) that takes place not long after Xanatos fell to the dark side, so 53 BBY might be closer to the mark. Tinwe^(comlink) 09:54, December 4, 2011 (UTC)
     • Fixed. NaruHina ^Talk 16:34, December 6, 2011 (UTC)
   • Oh and one more thing: irid has an entry in the Complete Star Wars Encyclopedia. Tinwe^(comlink) 11:02, December 4, 2011 (UTC)
     • Does it add anything and what page is it on?
       • Page 114; no new info there, it just states that they were avians native to Ragoon-6 and had yellow wings. Tinwe^(comlink) 07:45, December 7, 2011 (UTC)
         • Updated. NaruHina ^Talk 03:42, December 8, 2011 (UTC)
3. Bob
   • Should that read "with impunity?" As it stands, they got punished for their attacks on their parents. ~Savage 15:17, December 13, 2011 (UTC)
     • Gah! Eight lashes, Me! Fixed. NaruHina ^Talk 09:06, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

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