Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Independence

The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a comprehensive article nomination that was unsuccessful. Please do not modify it.

Independence

• Nominated by: Vitus Infinitus^Talk 01:59, August 20, 2018 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:This was kind of random but I was feeling it.

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Tommy

• Multiple refs about ship info not in the sources section. You need to explain how you got that information if the ship isn't appearing in those works, like this.
  • Done--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 18:26, August 20, 2018 (UTC)
    • Watch your spaces. It's worth previewing your work before saving.
    • To deduce refs, I suggest grouping these for each source. E.g. "Star Wars Encyclopedia of Starfighters and Other Vehicles establishes that the Defiance is an MC80a star cruiser, which Ultimate Star Wars states is a type of MC80 star cruiser, can carry ten starfighter squadrons, and has a crew of over 5,000." Tommy Macaroni 18:36, August 20, 2018 (UTC)
      • Done--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 21:39, August 20, 2018 (UTC)
• Please remove duplicate refs.
  • Where do you see that, can't find them, thanks--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 18:26, August 20, 2018 (UTC)
    • "975 kilometers per hour.[3] It was armed with thirty-six ion cannons, twenty-nine turbolaser batteries, and six tractor beam projectors.[3]"
      • Ah, fixed--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 21:39, August 20, 2018 (UTC)
• Please expand on the date note.
  • Done--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 18:26, August 20, 2018 (UTC)
• Imagecat? Tommy Macaroni 07:52, August 20, 2018 (UTC)
  • Added--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 18:26, August 20, 2018 (UTC)
• I think alliance fleet belongs in the navy parameter. Tommy Macaroni 07:54, August 20, 2018 (UTC)
  • Done--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 18:26, August 20, 2018 (UTC)
• No info about where the Legends ship got its name from?
  • Added--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 21:39, August 20, 2018 (UTC)
• Could we get a bit more detail about the Battle of Endor? Why did it fight there? Who was it fighting against? Tommy Macaroni 18:36, August 20, 2018 (UTC)
  • Expanded to what I believe is relevant. I'll be moving this to a GA nomination--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 21:39, August 20, 2018 (UTC)
• Article is currently over 250 words. I'll need confirmation before I can remove it. Tommy Macaroni 08:43, August 21, 2018 (UTC)
  • Yup, go ahead. I'll take this to a GA soon, thanks!--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 14:20, August 21, 2018 (UTC)

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