Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Incident Commander

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Incident Commander

• Nominated by: Coruscantfan ^(Talk) 06:52, January 24, 2013 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Project CSF

(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)

Support

1. Did a copy-edit. Mainly, I tackled the passage noted below. Rather than having it be a part of the previous sentence, I divided it off into its own sentence for better flow. Trak Nar ^{Ramble on} 05:35, January 27, 2013 (UTC)
2. 501st dogma^(talk) 13:19, January 27, 2013 (UTC)
3. Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 02:05, February 4, 2013 (UTC)
4. —Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 04:50, February 8, 2013 (UTC)

Object

1. 501st
   • "..all negotiations and as well as final say on tactical options..." This doesn;t sound right.
     • Done.
   • Compltetly source the BtS, as you sourced the rest. 501st dogma^(talk) 01:39, January 26, 2013 (UTC)
     • Done. Coruscantfan ^(Talk) 02:51, January 26, 2013 (UTC)
2. Exiled Jedi
   • Please use the InsiderCite template for the appearances section and for the references.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 23:16, January 27, 2013 (UTC)
     • Do I still need to do that since it was also printed in Republic Commando: Triple Zero? Coruscantfan ^(Talk) 13:40, January 31, 2013 (UTC)
       • No, but I think you should mention that the story was reprinted in the book in the BTS.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 23:55, February 2, 2013 (UTC)
         • Done. Coruscantfan ^(Talk) 06:10, February 3, 2013 (UTC)

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