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Ilthmar's Fist
- Nominated by: ThrawnChiss7
Assembly Cupola 00:25, 14 September 2023 (UTC) - Nomination comments:
- Date Archived: 02:40, 20 September 2023 (UTC)
- Final word count: 142 words (0 introduction, 122 body, 20 behind the scenes)
- WookieeProject (optional): WP:WARFARE
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Lewisr (talk) 17:02, 14 September 2023 (UTC)- Nice work!
Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 20:57, 15 September 2023 (UTC) - —spookywillowwtalk 02:39, 20 September 2023 (UTC)
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Navy should have a reference in the infobox?Rxxxxxxxxxx (talk) 00:30, 14 September 2023 (UTC)- Yea, I don't know why that wasn't there before. Fixed now. ThrawnChiss7 Assembly Cupola 00:36, 14 September 2023 (UTC)
- Yea, I don't know why that wasn't there before. Fixed now. ThrawnChiss7
Anil
Could you briefly mention why the Ilthmar's Fist and the rest of Death Squadron's command was ambiguous after Endor?- Warfare isn't really clear on that issue, it makes it seem like Prittick had clear command, but but because he was indecisive Harrsk left due to command structure. How Pritick being indecisive makes the command structure unclear is unclear to me. ThrawnChiss7 Assembly Cupola 02:01, 15 September 2023 (UTC)
- Just mentioning the losses at Endor is sufficient, in my opinion. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 20:28, 15 September 2023 (UTC)
- Just mentioning the losses at Endor is sufficient, in my opinion.
- Warfare isn't really clear on that issue, it makes it seem like Prittick had clear command, but but because he was indecisive Harrsk left due to command structure. How Pritick being indecisive makes the command structure unclear is unclear to me. ThrawnChiss7
I'm unfamiliar with the overall story, but since the battlecruiser was part of Harrsk's rogue faction that went to the Deep Core, do you think it's fair to assume the ship was affiliated with Zero Command and also add Category:Starships of the Zero Command?- I've updated the wording a bit. EGTW says that Prittick "declared he was talking ... the Ilthmar's Fist' ... to the Deep Core until a clear chain of command could be established.". We don't know if it actualy made it to the deep core and thus joined Zero Command. ThrawnChiss7 Assembly Cupola 02:01, 15 September 2023 (UTC)
- Yeah, that's fair. Though it may be worth mentioning that the Deep Core group that Ilthmar's Fist was to be a part of eventually formed Zero Command, without assuming if the Fist made it or not. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 20:28, 15 September 2023 (UTC)
- I guess that makes sense. The eventual formation of Zero Command has now been mentioned. ThrawnChiss7 Assembly Cupola 20:39, 15 September 2023 (UTC)
- I guess that makes sense. The eventual formation of Zero Command has now been mentioned. ThrawnChiss7
- Yeah, that's fair. Though it may be worth mentioning that the Deep Core group that Ilthmar's Fist was to be a part of eventually formed Zero Command, without assuming if the Fist made it or not.
- I've updated the wording a bit. EGTW says that Prittick "declared he was talking ... the Ilthmar's Fist' ... to the Deep Core until a clear chain of command could be established.". We don't know if it actualy made it to the deep core and thus joined Zero Command. ThrawnChiss7
If the objection above is a no, I think it'd be reasonable to at least add Category:Starships of the Imperial splinter factions as it was part of the breakaway Imperial ships. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 21:43, 14 September 2023 (UTC)
- I don't think we have enough information to tell. We just don't know anything other than Harrsk said he was taking it to the Deep Core. ThrawnChiss7 Assembly Cupola 02:01, 15 September 2023 (UTC)
- I don't think we have enough information to tell. We just don't know anything other than Harrsk said he was taking it to the Deep Core. ThrawnChiss7
Comments
Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 02:39, 20 September 2023 (UTC)