Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Ibbian Spaceport

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Ibbian Spaceport

• Nominated by: BloodOfIrizi (talk) 18:43, 16 September 2022 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: im running out of cohbo CANs
• WookieeProject (optional): Wookieepedia:WookieeProject Novels Wookieepedia:WookieeProject Chiss

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Support

1. Run out of Cohbo CANs! Join the Kilji-Grysk-Paataatus-Nikardun-Vak-Urchiv-ki side :P Samonic ^(Talk) 17:26, 19 September 2022 (UTC)
2. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 05:09, 4 October 2022 (UTC)
3. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 17:41, 6 October 2022 (UTC)
4. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 05:40, 10 October 2022 (UTC)

Object

Samonic

• (Review note or comment) If you are to continue nominating articles, you should read other novels. I ran out of CANs pretty quickly until I read other novels.
  • oh i've read almost every canon SW novel out there, but theres something fun about Chiss CANs lol.
    • Maybe you could do some Legends sourcebook noms, there's quite a lot of Legends Chiss stuff. I've personally enjoyed The Unknown Regions, lots of Vagaari info. Samonic ^(Talk) 22:17, 16 September 2022 (UTC)
• Did Borika drive Thalias to the spaceport? If so, you must specify that and that Thalias left Ool.Samonic ^(Talk) 18:51, 16 September 2022 (UTC)
  • done BloodOfIrizi (talk) 22:04, 16 September 2022 (UTC)

Manoof

• I think the first sentence needs to be tweaked to say "on the planet Ool, part of the Chiss Ascendancy", current phrasing indicates the planet IS the nation. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 09:36, 3 October 2022 (UTC)
• Is Caregiver capitalized or not, the caregiver article is also inconsistent Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 09:36, 3 October 2022 (UTC)
• I believe "drove" is typically used for wheeled vehicles rather than repulsorcraft/speeders. Can this be rephrased? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 09:36, 3 October 2022 (UTC)
• The attribution can be cut down to just say "Borika", it sounds like the subject of the conversation is Ool Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 09:36, 3 October 2022 (UTC)
  • all done BloodOfIrizi (talk) 18:58, 3 October 2022 (UTC)

Braha

• Can there be some elaboration in the quote attribs on who Borika is speaking to? Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 19:09, 5 October 2022 (UTC)
  • yeah BloodOfIrizi (talk) 22:53, 5 October 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 05:40, 10 October 2022 (UTC)