Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Iazacal liquor

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Iazacal liquor

  • Nominated by: JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 05:57, 13 August 2023 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:
  • Date Archived: 20:24, 16 August 2023 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 136 words (0 introduction, 111 body, 25 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:THR, WP:NOVELS

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Support

  1. ECvote TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 15:08, 16 August 2023 (UTC)
  2. ECvote Lewisr (talk) 15:37, 16 August 2023 (UTC)
  3. ECvote —spookywillowwtalk 20:18, 16 August 2023 (UTC)

Object

spookly
  • I don't think Axel being human is sourceable to Convergence.
    • Switched the context.
  • It seems like the mention from chapter 22 indicates the liquor's color is amber.
    • Oops yeah, forgot to mention that.
  • Given there is space with the wordcount and such, would it be too much trouble to get the tavern worked into the prose to be linked to?—spookywillowwtalk 14:46, 13 August 2023 (UTC)
Lew
  • 'Later, the Jedi Knight Gella Nattai drank in the city of U'ronoh a stinger' this reads a bit awkwardly. Could you restructure it a bit? Lewisr (talk) 15:32, 13 August 2023 (UTC)
    • I had done that so that I could use a parenthetical but it definitely wasn't ideal, reworded.
Anil
  • Is there any particular reason for pipelinking liquor to Alcohol instead of Liquor and not adding Category:Liquors? I think the name itself is sufficient to make that assumption. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 20:11, 13 August 2023 (UTC)
    • Didn't know we had that, switched.
  • About your ongoing Convergence-related nominations in general, while some of them call U'ronoh a village, others like this one suggest it was a city. Which one is true? TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 20:27, 13 August 2023 (UTC)
    • It reads like a big village, so city isn't super innacurate, but switched to mining village for consistency. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 06:02, 16 August 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 20:11, 16 August 2023 (UTC)