Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/IM-6 medic droid

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Contents

  • 1 IM-6 medic droid
    • 1.1 (3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)
      • 1.1.1 Support
      • 1.1.2 Object
        • 1.1.2.1 Tommy
        • 1.1.2.2 Ayrehead
        • 1.1.2.3 SE
      • 1.1.3 Comments

IM-6 medic droid

  • Nominated by: AV-6R7Crew Pit 18:55, May 6, 2018 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:

(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)

Support

  1. Tommy Imperial Emblem Macaroni 20:22, May 6, 2018 (UTC)
  2. ECvote Corellian PremierJedi symbolThe Force will be with you always 16:48, May 17, 2018 (UTC)
  3. ECvote Ayrehead02 (talk) 05:59, May 24, 2018 (UTC)
  4. ECvote Supreme Emperor (talk) 04:52, June 20, 2018 (UTC)

Object

Tommy
  • Per WP:MOS#Naming articles, the bolded part shouldn't have any links in it.
    • Pipelinked elsewhere in the article. - AV-6R7Crew Pit 20:11, May 6, 2018 (UTC)
  • Could you say that the AT-TE was a walker or something? Just to give a bit of context. Tommy Imperial Emblem Macaroni 19:24, May 6, 2018 (UTC)
    • Added. - AV-6R7Crew Pit 20:11, May 6, 2018 (UTC)
Ayrehead
  • References like ref 2 need to include a second sentence stating "since source states that subject is a medical droid, it must therefore be a first class droid. Ayrehead02 (talk) 07:40, May 16, 2018 (UTC)
    • Added. - AV-6R7Crew Pit 04:05, May 23, 2018 (UTC)
  • Could you reword the final part of the body? It sounds like they treated all clone troopers injured anywhere in the clone wars. Ayrehead02 (talk) 07:40, May 16, 2018 (UTC)
    • Any better? - AV-6R7Crew Pit 04:05, May 23, 2018 (UTC)
SE
  • What do you mean by "to fill out All Terrain Tactical Enforcer walker"? Supreme Emperor (talk) 04:20, May 27, 2018 (UTC)
    • Is that any better? - AV-6R7Crew Pit 21:34, May 30, 2018 (UTC)
      • It still reads a bit weird to me. Can you reword it using something other than "to fill out"? Supreme Emperor (talk) 03:04, June 3, 2018 (UTC)
        • "Fill out" is the phrasing used in the book, and I havent been able to find a suitable synonym. Do you have any suggesstions? - AV-6R7Crew Pit 07:39, June 9, 2018 (UTC)
          • Maybe to complement the crews? Supreme Emperor (talk) 13:00, June 15, 2018 (UTC)
            • Fixed. - AV-6R7Crew Pit 16:40, June 15, 2018 (UTC)

Comments