Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Hokk

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Hokk

Nominated by: Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 02:37, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
Nomination comments:No comment until the time limit is up. :)

(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)

Support

Looks good.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 21:34, July 23, 2011 (UTC)
~Savage 14:46, July 28, 2011 (UTC)
Menkooroo 14:44, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Object

Exiled Jedi
- ~~If you do not see Hokk in the game, I do not think that you can say he is human.~~--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 16:40, July 22, 2011 (UTC)
  - Fixed. Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 21:06, July 23, 2011 (UTC)

~~Shouldn't the events surrounding the leading quote be worked into the article itself? Something about how he met J'aahn at Station 6C?~~ Menkooroo 00:24, August 8, 2011 (UTC)
- He didn't meet J'aahn at station 6C. At least in no canon sources. You merely hear him saying meet me at Station 6C. Then you have a choice to either kill J'aahn, or pass by him. Either way, that's the end of his appearance. Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 02:08, August 8, 2011 (UTC)
  - Cool tools. How about a little bit of elaboration on how Jaden stopped the cultists, though? Maybe even a mention of how Hokk was going to meet J'aahn at Station 6C befor Jaden stopped them. Since the fact that he was going to meet J'aahn is all that we know about this character, it's probably worth mentioning. Menkooroo 02:40, August 8, 2011 (UTC)
    - Alrighty, try that. Oh, and if anyone wonders why there isn't an article for "Station Six-C", it's probably because there's not really enough relevant info to make it. Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 15:58, August 8, 2011 (UTC)
Not an objection, but after archiving a bunch of your noms, I think I should let you know the correct order of templates --- {{Eras|}} always comes first, followed by any other permanent templates such as {{Conjecture}} or {{Youmay}}, and finally {{CAnom}}. Menkooroo 02:43, August 8, 2011 (UTC)
- Oh, ok. I always kinda wondered about that. But, putting the eras on top didnt seem quite right. But, I'll remember that. Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 15:54, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

~~I cannot find any good images to use, so if someone could find one that would be good.~~ Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 02:37, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
- Given his nature as a character from a video game, you really should have gotten a picture before you nominated him. NaruHina ^Talk 04:54, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
  - Upon further review, I found that you only hear Hokk and don't actually see him. Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 16:11, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
    - How do you know which character is the one you come in contact with? Does his voice sound like it comes through a speaker or something? NaruHina ^Talk 22:56, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
      - You can hear J'aahn's voice clearly, while Hokk's voice is coming through as if through a comlink. Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 01:10, July 14, 2011 (UTC)