Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Heliol

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Heliol

  • Nominated by: JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 06:11, 13 August 2023 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:
  • Date Archived: 19:53, 20 August 2023 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 108 words (0 introduction, 83 body, 25 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:THR, WP:NOVELS

(3 ECs/0 Users/3 Total)

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Support

  1. ECvote Lewisr (talk) 18:17, 20 August 2023 (UTC)
  2. ECvote TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 19:45, 20 August 2023 (UTC)
  3. ECvote Fan26 (Talk) 19:52, 20 August 2023 (UTC)

Object

Lew
  • Could you reword the first sentence a bit?
    • How would you suggest mentioning the bit about "settled in the underground caverns of the region"?
      • Perhaps 'Heliol was a village settled in the underground caverns within a region of the planet E'ronoh.' Does that work with you? Lewisr (talk) 15:34, 16 August 2023 (UTC)
  • Axel being a human isn't citable to the book, but in this instance I think you can just change his context to Republic envoy or something to avoid citing a different source Lewisr (talk) 16:35, 13 August 2023 (UTC)
Anil
spookly
  • If I'm remembering correctly, the several villages they go to were all visiting on the Amaryliss to deliver aid supplies. I think that's worth mentioning.—spookywillowwtalk 02:43, 14 August 2023 (UTC)
    • Added, I didn't link anything to ration because I don't believe the type was specified. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 06:10, 16 August 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 19:52, 20 August 2023 (UTC)