Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Heep-heep

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Heep-heep

  • Nominated by: Stake black msg 21:24, March 1, 2013 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: The only sources for information are the quoted poem and the image.

(2 ECs/3 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. ECvote 501st dogma(talk) 16:45, March 3, 2013 (UTC)
  2. Commander Code-8 G'day, mate 21:08, March 3, 2013 (UTC)
  3. ECvote Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 13:42, March 4, 2013 (UTC)
  4. — DigiFluid(Whine here) 19:23, March 5, 2013 (UTC)
  5. Winterz (talk) 14:19, March 6, 2013 (UTC)

Object

  1. CC-8
    • The article reads to me a bit more like a character article than a species article, as in it sounds like this article was about a Heep rather than the general species, can you try to fix it up by pluralizing a few words.
      • True. Done.
        • You've still left it referring to a singular Heep-Heep in the Bts, but I've just changed that myself. Commander Code-8 G'day, mate 03:13, March 3, 2013 (UTC)
    • Since we have no clue if Zrak was a planet or some other location, it probably shouldn't be in the homeworld section of the infobox. Commander Code-8 G'day, mate 11:04, March 2, 2013 (UTC)
      • Good point, I've removed it. Stake black msg 11:08, March 2, 2013 (UTC)
    • You've probably been doing this in all your Monsters and Aliens noms, but some context needs to be given for George Lucas in the Bts, just say he created Star Wars or something so its clear why the article is on the Star Wars website :P Commander Code-8 G'day, mate 03:13, March 3, 2013 (UTC)
      • Wow, you're right.
    • If the poem and the picture are the only info availible, I'm not really sure that it's correct to say they stayed near tight holes, what do you think? Commander Code-8 G'day, mate 03:13, March 3, 2013 (UTC)
      • I changed the wording, see if you like it. Stake black msg 15:13, March 3, 2013 (UTC)
  1. 501st
    • I wouldn't give the quote atribution as just "Poem." It should be something like " a poem," or "a poem mentioning Heep-Heeps." Also, you don't need to link it, as the poem's linked in the main body.
    • Otherwise, nice article. 501st dogma(talk) 18:24, March 2, 2013 (UTC)
  1. Winterz
    • Context on Zrak, "a location/place called" would be one way to put it. Also identify it in the respective system. Winterz (talk) 17:37, March 5, 2013 (UTC)

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