- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a comprehensive article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Hakin
- Nominated by: Hanzo Hasashi 17:15, February 26, 2011 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Former Skiff Racer.
(2 ECs/0 Users/2 Total)
Support
Menkooroo 06:33, March 4, 2011 (UTC)- ~ SavageBob 21:40, March 6, 2011 (UTC)
Object
The sentence beginning with "In 0 BBY" is very long and winding with a lot of commas. Can you break it up into multiple sentences?- Done.
Can you give a more specific reference for Ref #5 (ie, a specific card)?Menkooroo 01:34, March 4, 2011 (UTC)- Overlooked the fact that what I was citing did not have any url :/. Now taken care of. Hanzo Hasashi 05:09, March 4, 2011 (UTC)
Please add a few words about how he looks: light skin, blue eyes, uniform, brown hair, pencil-thin mustache (the Boston Blackie kind). Also, perhaps mention the weapon he wielded. ~ SavageBob 04:28, March 6, 2011 (UTC)- I'm going to assume this will go in the P & T. Hanzo Hasashi 16:36, March 6, 2011 (UTC)
- Wields a DH-17, I'm finding the source for that being the weapon though. Hanzo Hasashi 17:18, March 6, 2011 (UTC)
- Got source. Hanzo Hasashi 17:49, March 6, 2011 (UTC)
Cool! Can you source the last bit of P&T? ~ SavageBob 17:50, March 6, 2011 (UTC)- Already is sourced, if you mean the weapon. And can you please archive my other 2 noms, they have 2 EC votes after more than a week. Hanzo Hasashi 17:56, March 6, 2011 (UTC)
- Have already just archived my two other noms, but when you support this nom, can you please immediately archive it, as enough time would have passed? Hanzo Hasashi 19:08, March 6, 2011 (UTC)
- I'm facing finals in real life, so I won't have time to do more than support noms for the next week or so, sorry. :( Also, I don't think there's a rule against it, but it's probably best practice that the nominator of a CAN not archive their own CANs due to the conflict of interest. There's no rush, so perhaps it's best to let someone else do it. :) ~ SavageBob 21:40, March 6, 2011 (UTC)
- Have already just archived my two other noms, but when you support this nom, can you please immediately archive it, as enough time would have passed? Hanzo Hasashi 19:08, March 6, 2011 (UTC)
- Already is sourced, if you mean the weapon. And can you please archive my other 2 noms, they have 2 EC votes after more than a week. Hanzo Hasashi 17:56, March 6, 2011 (UTC)
- Got source. Hanzo Hasashi 17:49, March 6, 2011 (UTC)
- Wields a DH-17, I'm finding the source for that being the weapon though. Hanzo Hasashi 17:18, March 6, 2011 (UTC)
- I will wait until this Saturday, which will be 2 weeks since the initial nomination. Good articles and featured articles tend to be archived much quicker after enough time has passed. Hanzo Hasashi 18:53, March 7, 2011 (UTC)
- I'm going to assume this will go in the P & T. Hanzo Hasashi 16:36, March 6, 2011 (UTC)
253 words. If you can, I'd actually recommend trimming some fat rather than moving it to the GAN page, though.Menkooroo 05:20, March 7, 2011 (UTC)- Done, trimmed to 249 words. Hanzo Hasashi 18:53, March 7, 2011 (UTC)
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