Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Hadrian

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Hadrian

  • Nominated by: Panther436 (talk) 22:36, 10 December 2023 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:
  • Date Archived: 22:36, 12 December 2023 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 152 words (0 introduction, 119 body, 33 behind the scenes)
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(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)

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Support

  1. ECvote Lewisr (talk) 23:04, 11 December 2023 (UTC)
  2. ECvote —spookywillowwtalk 01:07, 12 December 2023 (UTC)
  3. ECvote TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 18:37, 12 December 2023 (UTC)
  4. OOM 224 (he/him) 18:43, 12 December 2023 (UTC)

Object

OOM
  • I don't think it's necessary to list the affiliation since that's more of a place instead of an organisation. Plus, there's not much point of an infobox in a four-sentence article.
    • Removed
  • Does the story specify Hadrian to be "the colleague," or is "a colleague" more appropriate? Also, did Hood show up late just because he hoped Hadrian would fill his absence for a while (as the wording currently suggests), or was there another reason? OOM 224 (he/him) 22:43, 10 December 2023 (UTC)
    • Changed to "a colleague." Short answer to your second question is that it was one of multiple reasons, so I removed the "because" to avoid sounding like it was the only reason. Panther436 (talk) 04:48, 11 December 2023 (UTC)
      • Fab OOM 224 (he/him) 18:43, 12 December 2023 (UTC)
Lew
  • Can you find a way to include or pipelink Bespinite per the category you have? Lewisr (talk) 16:56, 11 December 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 22:36, 12 December 2023 (UTC)